i hate that he revealed that he is from another world casually like that to two strangers that he knew nothing about... that's stupid

I started reading this today and i have to day it's pretty Intriguing, the world building is so good and the plot is really fascinating. the characters have their own flaws and they acquire for perfection which isn't really ideal and their economy is bound to fall due to religious strife but i do love the interactions I just wish that the MC had a better control of his government rather than allowing them to cause cause and promoting religion fanatism😩

Brother might as well turn Drogo, I mean Milton into John, set up a Dothraki Savage Reservation for the Rich to tour why dont ya, I thought I was getting a good old-fashioned OP Game of Thrones Kingdom Builder story but you gave me Brave New World Catholic Crusade Perfection Nightmare

Only read up to chapter 26 so far, and I'm getting like really really heavy We Happy Few vibes. The seemingly perfect society held all together with joy in a pill, you can really feel how unnerving the society is. The way Mark and Clara so casually brainwash people while being happy and joyful is really off putting but also great. The way the story is written has me flopping between cheering for Mark and Clara and kinda sorta hoping for their downfall lol. I'm enjoying what I've read so far and hope to enjoy the rest of the chapters.

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It is good but I feel like the plot can move a bit more faster but overall it is a good fanfiction I would recommend for other people to read

Author here please if you as readers have any issues about either any grammar mistakes or the quality of the plot please comment also enjoy my fanfiction it is kind of inspired by my relationship with my mother we always debate about religion but always agree to disagree and she always gets the last word plus we dance everyday to keep skinny so if u guys like my story please leave a review or give me some power stones

Amazing story would recommend to anyone who will listen and the concept really tingles my specific tastes so I am happy the author have used a bit AI but I think it is for grammar corrections and stuff so you know that the books reading quality is guaranteed I will keep on reading and I wish the author the best of luck