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greatcheesemaster22hPostedI have read the entire book and the only thing I can say is it a masterpiece and touching piece of literature normally harry potter fics go two routes one where abruptly ends or one where it keeps on going even though it's way past it's time but this is an exception to the normal way with it being to give without giving too much
- greatcheesemaster1dCommented
you doing a very good job don't listen to the haters they always find something to hate on
And lastly, some say that my story is too long and that nothing has changed, well I only tell you this: my story is long, because I have dedicated day and night to form a story that is worth reading, even if there are clear grammatical mistakes, I always try to make the readers feel comfortable with what I write, since I myself am also a reader, however, do not come to say that my story has been boring, because even though the canon has not begun, I have managed to keep them happy with what I do, which is something that also fascinates me. - greatcheesemaster1dReplied to Marcia_05Some people comment that I haven't changed anything in the canon, that the Xandar intervention hasn't helped at all, and let me tell you that happens because the canon hasn't even started yet, in Patreon the story goes in chapter 90, and it's then, and barely Azrael has given orders to head to Westeros. Besides, the canon has changed, the North is advancing, there is possible rebellion in the Reach, Westerland is heading in another direction in the future rebellion, and Dorne is becoming powerful with the trade with Xandar, so don't say that the canon hasn't changed.
- greatcheesemaster1dCommentedFirst, I'm not writing porn, so if you think that every five chapters I'll write half a +18 chapter, let me tell you that you're very wrong. I started writing on Wattpad, and many know the level of perversity there, so I'm not weirded out about those scenes but don't pretend that because the background world is ASOIAF, you'll see meaningless sex everywhere.
- greatcheesemaster2dReplied to Nexuxz
she's hot 🔥
"NOT HIM! GET IT OUT OF MY SIGHT!" Bellatrix shouted frantically, her eyes lit ablaze, and in that moment, she was reminded just who exactly Bellatrix Lestrange was. She wasn't just her dear elder sister. No, she was also the most talented and most deadly witch of their age, second only to perhaps the Dark Lord himself. - greatcheesemaster2dReplied to Reality_warper004
Well u see my house like super huge and my mother didn't want to clean all that extra space that we don't use so she divided the house into two smaller parts and rented one part out while we lived in the other part the dude who rented it was like a serial killer and was keeping three other dudes as hostages in there for like weeks and the police finally tracked him down to our rented house
"OK!OK! STOP! Honestly, no wonder Hufflepuff is so united. They behave like Indian aunties, gossiping all day. And to answer your question, she is........" - greatcheesemaster2dReplied to Avery025
aww comeon not the lasagna
And she did not let him speak any further, pushing off her toes. And her lips crashed onto his own. His arms tightened around her, and she felt her mind getting lost as she left all the other worries behind her. To her, it was just him and her, at that moment that mattered. - greatcheesemaster2dReplied to Reality_warper004
yeah it's true one time my auntie quite literally broke through a police barricade to get into our house to find out what was going on and why there were police officers around our house
"OK!OK! STOP! Honestly, no wonder Hufflepuff is so united. They behave like Indian aunties, gossiping all day. And to answer your question, she is........" - greatcheesemaster3dCommentedCh 33 Chapter 33
- greatcheesemaster3dCommented
aerys is dead and decomposing
Aerys turned away from the balcony and began to walk toward his chambers, - greatcheesemaster3dCommented
dourface thats funny
"Open the gates!" and then the fates were opened for them. She entered along with Ser Gerold. And both of them were greeted by one of her father's Council members. The Commander of the City Watch, Ser Stannis Baratheon. The man held the same dour look that had made her nickname the man Dourface. - greatcheesemaster6dCommented
fear and brutality are a good tool to control a population in the short term it will work without any hitches but in the long term it corrupts and overwork the system made to control the population with corruption in governmental roles and people rebelling against the system
'Momonga is too generous towards his subjects. How can one entity be so polarizing is beyond me,' The absolute ruthless brutality towards enemies and the soft caring attitude towards Tempest's citizens shown by the undead ruler didn't make much sense to her. Usually, effective rulers were just as ruthless towards their subjects to ensure they stayed in power, choosing fear over love as their primary method of control. Then again, Momonga's power was so overwhelming there wasn't anyone challenging his rule no matter where she looked. - greatcheesemaster8dCommented
whenever someone says Jamie I remember this dude
Jon shook his head with a smile. "I'm the line producer. Of course, I'd come to show you the way. Come, I'll show you your trailer and practice area. Careful with your step, by the way; it rained yesterday, and the ground is still muddy. Poor Jamie had a little accident." - greatcheesemaster8dReplied to Danshaku
yeah but he is physically 9 years old
"Jeff, don't do this. You'll get expelled from school," I let out between moans of pain. - greatcheesemaster8dCommented
I think I got a lot more a bit too early for my liking
Dylan laughed loudly, "That's a lie you will realize within a few years. Then you'll want to kiss all the time. And more." - greatcheesemaster8dCommentedHe grinned mischievously as he pinned me against the wall and said, "You'll grow it when you are older. Now, how about I show you the big difference between you and me."
- greatcheesemaster11dCommented
this is gonna spawn so many many conspiracy theories
I have become one of the first members of the "sons of liberty". - greatcheesemaster11dReplied to Li_Cangtian
I read searched this up and the reasons for the skeletons is because he gave his basement to a doctor studying human anatomy which means he was dissecting corpses which at the time was seen as a taboo or something so after dissection they would bury it in the floor of the basement
And let me say, the man was smart, but at the same time a little snobbish, arrogant, and quite the womanizer.7 - greatcheesemaster14dCommented
funny
"Be at ease. I am here to formally offer Alysa the position of Hobgoblin racial leader," Momonga declared with regal pose #13.