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SlumberSealLv24mth
2024-10-28 13:37

This novel is the literal definition of "Gold in a Miner's hand". The idea and planning are great. No one has ever thought of doing a fanfiction on Hebi Sasuke but unfortunately, the author of this fanfic is a rookie and can't bring out the true potential of this book. 5 stars either way. Get good author

As Sasuke With 10-Quest System

PurpleRoseImmortal
3.5
87 Chs

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PurpleRoseImmortalAuthor

I will try to get better. Thanks for the review

4mth
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Intense_Gaming_5908Lv4

It's a bad fan fiction. Character feels like NPC but the bad version.

4mth
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reza_AsgariLv1

there are lots of forced plot no detailed the idea of the plot is amazing that is why i still read it romance is odd ( It feels a little awkward for me) also the plot is like ONLY sasuke is getting stronger

4mth
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TranshumanistLv14

There are many plot holes and author's handwaving trying to smooth the plot. But all it does is make the world become an even more irrational mess than the original story.

4mth
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Brady_LustlaraLv1

The story is just weird. The MC is trying to be unique in taking over sound village which is honestly stupid because it literally has no powerful people or things. The female lead is just some random mob chick who simps after the MC which is a waste because of all the potential real characters in the shinobi world. just an all around letdown of a fic because of the ma's hairbrained schemes somehow working even with bad acting on his part.

4mth
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PurpleRoseImmortalAuthor

5 Stars for myself. Typical author behavior. If you like this novel, make sure to give a review and check out my Patreon for advanced chapters.

4mth
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DaoistCGid7jLv2

Good, but there are no strong details, the romance is trite, and the battles end quickly, as if he is focusing only on the hero becoming stronger. I hope you improve the details of the entire story. If you solve this problem, the story will become much better.

4mth
5
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clattan0iaLv11

The hero is not an anti-hero as promised, and the story is poorly written with little depth or originalit the story is bad, and I strongly advise against watching it not worth your time 👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👶🏼

2mth
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HanimeloveLv3

Not a good read, character development seems forced, definately need to improve writing skills. Just find something else .

2mth
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NeaCambeltLv1

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