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2024-10-27 01:04

Good, but there are no strong details, the romance is trite, and the battles end quickly, as if he is focusing only on the hero becoming stronger. I hope you improve the details of the entire story. If you solve this problem, the story will become much better.

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PurpleRoseImmortal
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Thanks for your honest review. I will try to improve

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