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StarGazerr
StarGazerrLv41mth
2024-10-08 08:17

You know... I think you should tone down that chinese MC attitude of the main character. At first, it’s kind of amusing, but after a while... it just becomes annoying. I haven’t read too many chapters so far, just around 20 or so, but so far the main character appears to be just dumb, selfish, and perverted.

Ultimate Man [JJK X SOL]: Loading Golden Entries at The Start

Junkdog
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101 Chs

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Junkdog
JunkdogAuthor

I've done my best to tone down his arrogant attitude, remove any racist remarks, and other things that are typical of a CN protagonist. However, any more changes would mean altering the author's story, which I won’t do. Despite the MC's arrogance, I still think this is a pretty good book compared to others. If you can’t continue reading because of his attitude, I completely understand, as it might not be to your taste. Either way, have a great day!

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DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv4

It can't be helped, but Chinese protags really be like young master gojo but worse

Junkdog:I've done my best to tone down his arrogant attitude, remove any racist remarks, and other things that are typical of a CN protagonist. However, any more changes would mean altering the author's story, which I won’t do. Despite the MC's arrogance, I still think this is a pretty good book compared to others. If you can’t continue reading because of his attitude, I completely understand, as it might not be to your taste. Either way, have a great day!
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Junkdog
JunkdogAuthor

Hi, I’ve taken the time to translate the names properly and smooth out any awkward lines, but there could still be a few errors. I’m open to any suggestions or feedback. I really believe it’s a great story, and I’ve put in a lot of effort to make it enjoyable for everyone. Have a nice read, Thank you

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Golden_dragoon
Golden_dragoonLv4

I like it______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Bukkas
BukkasLv4

A good initiative to start translating this work, I wish you all the best.

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Mirko22
Mirko22Lv3

I liked the story and its pace, not too slow and not too fast. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...........................[img=recommend]

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ponysha
ponyshaLv2

Really curious if girls from other anime will have cursed techniques? That would be cool. ..........................................................

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LORD_SHADOOW
LORD_SHADOOWLv4

I dont know what to say other than this is a peak fic, its amazing and so much fun to read Looking forward to more from you Author Arigato

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Mia_amalie
Mia_amalieLv1

Thank you for the wonderful translation, my brother, and your choice of this story is really successful, but I have a request, can you publish more chapters

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Aegis787
Aegis787Lv3

Not bad, I just have a question author will there be smut?

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Kurt_Pedrajita
Kurt_PedrajitaLv3

good job for doing a good translation while its hard to do, however i like to suggest to make your own ff and make this an example of the ff.by the way, the story are good but i cant stand the story of the original author and good job, have a nice year and good luck

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