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Abyss_LightLv45mth
2024-11-25 03:39

I have read up to chapter 109 n here is my honest review — god dam y is the mc being a slave of the system... no matter how you look at it the system is playing with mc and other emotions... you can say that it might be other entities that regressed the other characters but the mc system at least needs to explain the situation of the fate and plot being altered.... in mc first life he suffered due to plot and fate bullshit and not that in his second life where there is no such thing the system didn't explain clearly. if you want us to hate the female characters then don't bring up the plot and fate thing. even if you do don't leave plot Holes or maybe spoiler like you did went mc remove his sister's memory and system clearly said that she will only be affected for one life... by this point I think the system is clearly evil enjoying our mc suffering and show with his girlfriend. also you repeat words and sentences too much but even with all of this I still enjoy the roller coaster, though i enjoy harem but this one is also good... so a question celes or Ava or both or rose or all....

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
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297 Chs

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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

max is innocent 🦥 thanks for the review 😭🫂

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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

yeah right you are thee one controlling him so you are the real culprit you evil god

LazyDiablo:max is innocent 🦥 thanks for the review 😭🫂
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

Original_Eternal:yeah right you are thee one controlling him so you are the real culprit you evil god
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