wait, i think i already read a football novel with the same name as the MC, you steal others works or something?

nvm it's also your works xD so you're decided to rewrite the novel? so what's new on this rewrite version?

Nothing new in the first few chapters. I decided to slow him down a bit. I feel like he broke through to the first team a bit too quickly.

you didn't change about his attitude ? from what I've remembered, he's quite arrogant even though He's not that good, probably because he have the system, that's what making him arrogant?

I always thought his attitude was alright. He was just very competitive and always wanted to win

So many mistakes

Please correct those mistakes

I've seen the ones you pointed out. Thank you. I'll proof read the chapters and correct the mistakes right away. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out

👍🏾

another N***** protagonist....

I hope copyright doesn't hit you hard when this blows up the MC name

Could you please pinpoint where are the differences between the old and the current novel, as I don't want to read the novel again

From where he got into the first team. I feel it's a bit rushed so I'm going to slow him down there

Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?

if it's possible to pinpoint which chapter

don't mind him, just be careful with copyright like club's and players names

Late seventies to early eighties

Thanks man. I also appreciate you coming over to read the new version

Si, estoy cansado de tanto negro

Kys