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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author3mth
2024-09-14 05:42

Author here with mandatory five star review . Here's some things that I feel you should know before you jump in. This is a rewrite, not really important but I'm tossing it outside. There's going to be romance, but not in the early chapters so if you're here for the mushy stuff you're going to have to wait This is also going to cover the MC's personal life, it's not just about football and training, he has a life outside those things. That's all for now 👉🏽👈🏽

I Play Football With A System

Heavenmonarch_
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Neilyn
NeilynLv14

wait, i think i already read a football novel with the same name as the MC, you steal others works or something?

3mth
Neilyn
NeilynLv14

nvm it's also your works xD so you're decided to rewrite the novel? so what's new on this rewrite version?

Neilyn:wait, i think i already read a football novel with the same name as the MC, you steal others works or something?
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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

Nothing new in the first few chapters. I decided to slow him down a bit. I feel like he broke through to the first team a bit too quickly.

Neilyn:nvm it's also your works xD so you're decided to rewrite the novel? so what's new on this rewrite version?
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Neilyn
NeilynLv14

you didn't change about his attitude ? from what I've remembered, he's quite arrogant even though He's not that good, probably because he have the system, that's what making him arrogant?

Heavenmonarch_:Nothing new in the first few chapters. I decided to slow him down a bit. I feel like he broke through to the first team a bit too quickly.
3mth
Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

I always thought his attitude was alright. He was just very competitive and always wanted to win

Neilyn:you didn't change about his attitude ? from what I've remembered, he's quite arrogant even though He's not that good, probably because he have the system, that's what making him arrogant?
3mth
Moudassir_Ali
Moudassir_AliLv14

So many mistakes

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Moudassir_Ali
Moudassir_AliLv14

Please correct those mistakes

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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

I've seen the ones you pointed out. Thank you. I'll proof read the chapters and correct the mistakes right away. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out

Moudassir_Ali:Please correct those mistakes
3mth
Moudassir_Ali
Moudassir_AliLv14

👍🏾

Heavenmonarch_:I've seen the ones you pointed out. Thank you. I'll proof read the chapters and correct the mistakes right away. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

another N***** protagonist....

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Junkdog
JunkdogLv4

I hope copyright doesn't hit you hard when this blows up the MC name

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Tr0uble_Maker
Tr0uble_MakerLv4

Could you please pinpoint where are the differences between the old and the current novel, as I don't want to read the novel again

2mth
Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

From where he got into the first team. I feel it's a bit rushed so I'm going to slow him down there

Tr0uble_Maker:Could you please pinpoint where are the differences between the old and the current novel, as I don't want to read the novel again
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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?

Haku_Ouroboros:another N***** protagonist....
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Tr0uble_Maker
Tr0uble_MakerLv4

if it's possible to pinpoint which chapter

Heavenmonarch_:From where he got into the first team. I feel it's a bit rushed so I'm going to slow him down there
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Tr0uble_Maker
Tr0uble_MakerLv4

don't mind him, just be careful with copyright like club's and players names

Heavenmonarch_:Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?
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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

Late seventies to early eighties

Tr0uble_Maker:if it's possible to pinpoint which chapter
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Heavenmonarch_
Heavenmonarch_Author

Thanks man. I also appreciate you coming over to read the new version

Tr0uble_Maker:don't mind him, just be careful with copyright like club's and players names
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

Si, estoy cansado de tanto negro

Heavenmonarch_:Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?
2mth
BlitzUpNext
BlitzUpNextLv11

Kys

Haku_Ouroboros:another N***** protagonist....
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Remember this story from few months before, is it the same and nothing has changed? as I can see for now, you haven't reached when you were before (in the story)

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