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2024-10-11 18:33

Mediocre story, neither good nor bad. The main problems are that the world feels like wallpaper, but with many blank parts. For example, the fact that the protagonist has no identity in the world is already a huge problem, since he says that he lived thousands of years as an observer, but the moment he enters modern society, he can no longer forget his mark,The protagonist does not have a personality, he says he wants to avoid problems but he makes a car appear out of nowhere, but the main character's biggest problem is that he does not feel like he lived thousands of years, he feels like he has a few dozen years of emotional maturity, which he should have, would be essential to the story, but he does not feel that way, he feels like a teenager who thinks he is great but is not, humbly a reader

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