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AstralNinja420
AstralNinja420Lv144mth
2024-12-04 00:49

Get rid of this book or rewrite the touch to three or so parts instead of being idiotic and add 22 or so parts im literally skipping it because most people know the backstory of Optimus prime and megatron but in case they don’t then three parts minimum to tell it

Transformers Prime: I am Allspark

PRIME_PRIMUS
2.8
96 Chs

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Sandy_Cave6359
Sandy_Cave6359Lv4

fax literally waiting for it to be done. it filler and it's going to be more than the actual content soon

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AstralNinja420
AstralNinja420Lv14

Damn straight bro

Sandy_Cave6359:fax literally waiting for it to be done. it filler and it's going to be more than the actual content soon
4mth
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ZJAY_1
ZJAY_1Lv14

when it hits 41 I'm out

4mth
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DAKOTA_MORLEY
DAKOTA_MORLEYLv14

it's at 40 now bro

ZJAY_1:when it hits 41 I'm out
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Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajLv4

46

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Nameless_Crown
Nameless_CrownLv4

52

Vidhan_Bhardwaj:46
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Other Reviews
MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

FINALLY A GOOD TRANSFORMERS STORY IN HEOR I HOEP THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT IN THE END LIKE ALL TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE. THEIR NOT MANY TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE THOSE ANYONE KNOWS ONE BETTER THAN THIS THEN TELL ME DOWN THANK YOU. WE NEED MORE TRANSFORMERS NOVEL IN HERE.

7mth

Ekmah
EkmahLv15

right. allspark fall on earth, primitive kid touch it and become allspark. why not. Time skip of 300 000 years and the guy still discover his powers, and has basically done nothing. That's too much for my suspension of disbelief to handle.

6mth
NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

It looks interesting and has potential, but for the 12 chapters, the Mc just apear in like 3 or 4 chapters for a few paragraphs while the rest is just showing his little intereferences in the original story (that in the end, didn't really changed anything) You can se the Mc as a little Easter egg in the story, he will appear sometimes and do something funny for half a chapter

6mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

massive dissapointment mc barely seems involved in the story and he's human. idk why author thought yk transformer prime fic as an human with the allspark majorly dissapointing for me wouldn't read or recommend.

6mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Reveal spoiler

6mth
evilestheart
evilestheartLv4

it's a good concept but poorly executed. the MC is a little bit*h. he has unlimited power and thousands of years of time but is seriously weak. what did he do in all those years? laze around ? also why is he so easily flustered? did he get no action in those thousands of years. all in all this is a disapopointment.

6mth
Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajLv4

the only reason it has a rating above two is because Of update stability and world background other than that the Story is plain bad. its bad in a way that is simply unexplainable. the mc is useless in every aspect he's not even the allspark as he's just a rando human with no special powers per say cause bro has been running amd tunning from the race he created. its super annoying i wouldn't have guven this low rating but the arachnid chapter is just plain disgusting in this context.

6mth
Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

The story was at a good pace at the beginning, then it went downhill with each chapter, the MC barely appeared and then it simply started with a flashback that lasted like 10 chapters that practically tells a transformation movie.

5mth
GloryForAll
GloryForAllLv14

Great Idea, but poorly executed. Could do a rewrite at some point.

6mth
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