Not a bad story, but it's not a particularly good one. I'm not sure if it's a translation or not, but story progression is fine . My only problem with the story is mc being too frivolous. He doesn't really feel like a character but rather an observer. Sure, he might help here and there, but he does it for his own amusement. He's like a petulant child who has suddenly gotten massive powers and let it get to his head, which honestly a trademark of mtl translation. Anyway, thank you for the story.

Started off cool, nice worldbuilding and the protag had some of the typical chinese novel stereotypes but they were tolerable because there wasn’t any ultra national, china number 1 type stuff but now its gone into this weird nebulous state where its about to cross the event horizon and just become the typical Chinese protag to a higher degree.

Honestly i enjoyed what ive read so far. Hopefully it continues to on being like this and not turning shit

what's the original called??? i can' find it anywhere

Awesome can't wait to see what happens next hopefully soon 🎇🎆🎊🎉.................................................,..,.,,.,.,..,,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.

love it................................................................................................................................................

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The Mc is not something you can relate unless you're an asshole, the world background is actually pretty nice, I have no objection on that, and the Mc doesn't follow all the story and has original enemies that made sense. But Still it's a hard pill to take because the story is racist and the Mc is really not good...

The book isn't bad but it's more of a joke story. Author tried to give him powers from outside of Marvel as a joke with no explanation but that only raised questions instead of making you laugh. Despite having lived and studied in Kamar Taj for 16 years, he hasn't learned many spells and no one knows how he got Observation Haki and Kami-e. Like I said, not a bad story but after he comes back from the parallel universe, he stops growing and the story feels forced.