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R0BLv27mth
2024-09-19 10:47

Writing quality 5/5 (it's okay) Updating stability 5/5 (it's good) Story develooment 2/5 (very random) Character design 4/5 (normal I guess) World background 3/5 (the story contains mistakes about naruto world in general and I have no doubt more mistakes will appear) Current chap: 30

Ninja War God: Reborn with SSS Rank Cheats

Potaatoo
4.3
66 Chs

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Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

There's a reason why I said it's an alternate universe. The canon naruto universe has too many timeline inconsistencies and plotholes you know? I'm not saying that I'm going to fix them all. It's just that I'm going to use this plotholes for my own convenience and use the inconveniences in timelines however I want to. Lastly, I'm not perfect. So even I might overlook some things which might create plotholes too. Anyways, I'm glad you're liking it so far

7mth
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R0B
R0BLv2

Well that's a thing. I'm not reading this anymore, because the story development is butchered. People can still read when updates are slow or when the grammar sucks, but the storyline is the lifeline you know? You are playing in a game with rules and you ignore those rules - that's not something you should be proud anout.

Potaatoo:There's a reason why I said it's an alternate universe. The canon naruto universe has too many timeline inconsistencies and plotholes you know? I'm not saying that I'm going to fix them all. It's just that I'm going to use this plotholes for my own convenience and use the inconveniences in timelines however I want to. Lastly, I'm not perfect. So even I might overlook some things which might create plotholes too. Anyways, I'm glad you're liking it so far
7mth
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Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

lol the storyline was already fked up. You shouldn't talk if you don't know about the timeline inconsistencies or the multiple plotholes that naruto originally has. No one is asking you to stay either. You don't like this one, but I'm sure that there are a lot of novels following the proper storyline so yeah, there's enough food to find in this platform.

R0B:Well that's a thing. I'm not reading this anymore, because the story development is butchered. People can still read when updates are slow or when the grammar sucks, but the storyline is the lifeline you know? You are playing in a game with rules and you ignore those rules - that's not something you should be proud anout.
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Hero09
Hero09Lv3

Not really. Fics are storys to read. It being close to the source means nothing. All that matters is the actual story

R0B:Well that's a thing. I'm not reading this anymore, because the story development is butchered. People can still read when updates are slow or when the grammar sucks, but the storyline is the lifeline you know? You are playing in a game with rules and you ignore those rules - that's not something you should be proud anout.
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Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

Just following traditions. I'm writing this book for fun and to improve my skills as an author. I'm not claiming that my book is perfect, but I promise you that I'll listen to the comments. Ofc, only the comments that make sense. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.

7mth

Vector_Neo
Vector_NeoLv2

The pacing is good: the author makes sure to write about the MC when he trains, learns new jutsu and other important moments like missions, etc. It's good that the boring part is skipped. Quality is pretty good and the thing that sets this book apart from the rest is that this isn't a translation. It doesn't include shtty cultivation bs or talk about tribulations and what not. As for updates, it's got one of the best updates I've seen on this platform. The author goes from 1 to 6 per day, but since he has put in conditions for extra chapters and from the upload rate, it looks like the readers are doing a good job at reaching the goals. Due to this, the actual upload rate is around 3 to 6 per day. So far, I'm liking it a lot but if there are people who do not like the aburame clan, then this book isn't for you. But if there are people who still want to give it a try then there's a plus point about this book too. He's from the aburame clan, but from how the story is going, it looks like the Author plans on using the bugs as a supportive measure instead of the only way the aburame people fight, like in the anime. So yeah, I'm pretty hyped for how it'll turn out in the future.

7mth
Yolandaime
YolandaimeLv11

Reveal spoiler

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KyoXIzu
KyoXIzuLv4

It’s alright, just not my cup of tea.

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Dark_B
Dark_BLv14

Not dumb MC! No chinese names! Approved!

7mth
v00lum
v00lumLv1

what's going on bro are u rewrite? woah???????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

7mth
Kyle_Stroeder
Kyle_StroederLv4

I think this is one of the best books I’ve read in a long while good job keep it going

7mth
DaoistWqJ0Zg
DaoistWqJ0ZgLv1

Gostei bastante da história, ela passa uma visão melhor de um clã do universo de Naruto, abraçando as possibilidades, simplesmente divertida de se ler. Espero pela continuação

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Lions_King_0942
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