This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.

This story is annoying as fuck. Mostly because of just how erattic MC's power level seems to be. In one scene, he's walking around Suna as if he's stronger than all the shinobi there and could get away with them easily. In another scene, he's running away from his Sensei (a Jounin), like a little bitch. That's not even mentioning how he goes around killing civilians (innocent men, women and children) without any romarse or a second thought just because he wanted some more chakra. Finally, we get to MC's technique. He can apparently see incredibly far away and in almost invisible to other people's chakra sense. And this ability lasts as long as the author requires it of him. And then 'plot' happens and MC has suddenly forgotten or neglected to use his technique and finds himself facing enemy shinobi. This fic is pretty decent but shit like this makes it incredibly frustrating to read.

Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out

It's a good story, and very entertaining to read. But also rather frustrating because his own actions come back to bite him. Sometimes I have to wonder if he's a genius or a fool. Like, trading his fire technique for better fire jutsu. He just became a chunin and could've just learned better ones anyway. Now everyone and their grandma not only knows his signature technique, but uses it better than him. Or how he just stood around doing nothing, letting Danzo kill Fugaku and get stronger. Despite showing he could interfere from dozens of miles away like last time. I dunno man. It's a great story, but the MC's had 12 years, has triple eye hacks and it feels like he's STILL trying to find his bearings, lol. You can just think of this as me venting. Still like your story, and keep up the good work.

This is a pretty exceptional story, I don’t really have any major complaints about it, just minor ones that don’t detract from my enjoyment. I like the Dōjutsu, the protagonist is likeable, his actions have been smart and his morality being Chaotic Neutral is great to see since I love Neutral characters. The only real criticism I have would be that his development in a certain Kinjutsu should’ve been expanded upon by showing us his struggles and thought process in developing, it’s a-bit hard to believe even with his resources that he can accomplish that when he has such a poor talent in everything else. His apprenticeship was also hard to believe but I like it and your direction. Add in that it’s not impossible for it to happen and I'm fine with it, that’s all the constructive criticism I’ve got. Keep up the fantastic work, and I’m looking forward to the future of your story!

This story is awesome cant wait for more

I really liked it honestly post more and if anyone can recommend me noromance fan fiction with a villain like mc it would be nice and if possible noharem because I am not able to find quality work like thiss every story I see it have harem and romance I am tired of it😀

Pretty fun story to read. It read smoothly and I don't remember any errors. I like the dojutsu you created for the MC. This story just obliterated canon and it's awesome. I enjoy how MC is chaotic neutral but also intelligent.

I really like the concept of the story and how its written, the mc, the pacing, the plot besides Danzo.