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Jin_nimLv101mth
2025-01-18 16:08

Okay, first of all the story itself (or the synopsis) is kind of interesting. The power scaling is pretty balanced albeit some inconsistencies like the lifespan for each realm or something. Now, let's talk about the characters. Although the world building of the novel is interesting. The characters are built poorly, especially the MC, he's supposed to be portrayed as a cautious person, but only appears to be cowardly and sometimes make outrageous decisions. The author lacks the ability to show the potential of the novel and just basically throws in forced "dramas" and keeps introducing characters one after another. I've read until chapter 40 and the whole "marriage" issue is unbearable. The MC would resolve a problem and another one would pop up, the author doesn't even put a time for the MC's training. And if they do put one, they don't explain in more detail what the MC did, they just tell how the MC broke through a realm and that's it. I don't know if it gets good in later chapters but I'll give it a go and just put a more elaborate review after I catch up with the lastest chaps. Another thing, some item ranks are kind of confusing and inconsistent. Especially the Qi Cultivation Liquid which has "Top Grade" and "top-grade" quality. I mean what's the difference? The author doesn't even put a short note at the ending of each chapter to clarify the items, artifacts, and power rankings. Overall, it lacks the depth and logic. It has potential but unless the author learns how to properly bring out those potential it would remain as a low quality work. Not here to undermine them, but I hope with this comment they would put more effort in improving their work and not get discouraged. You're still doing a great job author but you need to put in a little bit more work. (Well they wouldn't follow any suggestions if they're writing this novel just to earn and not provide quality entertainment to the readers anyways.)

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Solomon_AberuagbaLv2

the last part isn't necessary though

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