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I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv147mth
2024-09-19 16:24

Looks great but author mentions "fun" but I don't see it? There's no comedy, the action is overpowering enemies but not the level of coolness like saitama, bro doesn't flex like a chinese young master(but I respect that since it's the ayanokoji template lol) and I'm still finding on the good parts. Seeing that it's author's first work actually this is pretty good enough, but the rest of the scenes needed some imagination to actually enjoy yourself.

Dropped Officially Go read something else instead.

_TheWatcher_
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65 Chs

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_TheWatcher_
_TheWatcher_Author

Than ill try to improve. I am kind of surprised to see this many people actually reading it.

7mth
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_TheWatcher_
_TheWatcher_Author

Thanks a lot for reading this.

7mth
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_TheWatcher_Author

Give me ideas to add in this story.Also thanks for reading this.

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DepressoGrande
DepressoGrandeLv1

I like the story and it's general plot. Some aspects of finer plot detail could be improved, but it's solid overall. Not a bad fic to pass the time and the author uploads regularily. Fair warning, ai is used for the story writing but the author does a pretty good job in editing the artificial parts and making the story flow most of the time. Hope you like it.

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The first few chapters were good, I wouldn't even realize they were written with AI if the author didn't mention it, but soon after the quality dropped a lot, it seemed like the author stopped editing and the result was a story clearly written by AI, full of redundant moments, words that were repeated over and over again and the story in general became boring. Other points to be mentioned are how the MC was created in the white room of Classroom of the Elite but immediately jumped out of that world without ever returning, in addition to several chapters of a very poorly written investigation, with the whole Sirius Black case being another poorly written investigation. The concept of the fic is not bad, but I think when the author stopped editing so much and delegated most of it to the AI ​​the story became bad.

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Ken_Kaneki_3855
Ken_Kaneki_3855Lv4

it's a nice idea but boring to read in my opinion there's something lacking to it and ijust can't immerse myself to it

7mth
A_wall1206
A_wall1206Lv15

i was a fan until you brought minecraft into it wont even bother from that point

7mth
LastGod
LastGodLv5

There is NO story here. The MC is a side character in every world this is probably one of the most boring poweful characters i have ever seen. And because of the world hopping i dont see this changing.

7mth
NiteHk
NiteHkLv4

Updated Review The Fic is a banger. And Don't get discouraged by the negative comments Author. For anyone who is going to read this fic. It's AI written and the Author himself said that he is not a writer. As for the Storyline from chapter 1-3 it's just an explanation from the MC point of view about his early life the actual story starts from chapter 4 and despite there being some instances where you feel the usage of AI the storyline has been good so far. MC tho could interact with the others more. Keep it up bro you're doing good.

7mth
Fox_king_1789
Fox_king_1789Lv5

very good 👍 work and so far I am enjoying it alot and hope this work remains continues along with steady updates. give it a read.

7mth
KillaJpeezy
KillaJpeezyLv4

i really enjoy your story keep up the good work cause its gonna pay off you got real talent for this thing and i want to see you continue. Also dont let none of the negative stuff get to you just keep going and youll be a ok.

7mth
AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

No🗿

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