The first few chapters were good, I wouldn't even realize they were written with AI if the author didn't mention it, but soon after the quality dropped a lot, it seemed like the author stopped editing and the result was a story clearly written by AI, full of redundant moments, words that were repeated over and over again and the story in general became boring. Other points to be mentioned are how the MC was created in the white room of Classroom of the Elite but immediately jumped out of that world without ever returning, in addition to several chapters of a very poorly written investigation, with the whole Sirius Black case being another poorly written investigation. The concept of the fic is not bad, but I think when the author stopped editing so much and delegated most of it to the AI the story became bad.
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I didn't stop editing its just my ideas are running out I only had 30 chapters or so after that I have to write it, so the main problem is the lack of story line. I could stop posting for 2-3 weeks and prepare a storyline then I would be able to solely focus on editing the chapters not thinking about what to do next. I appreciate your view and I myself know That I have reduced editing the chapters.
I didn't know how to put it into words, but the problem is exactly the storyline as you said. If you want to focus on writing a good fic, my advice is to take your time and post on forums like Questionablequesting and Spacebattles, there daily chapters are not the norm so no one will complain about slower updates.
_TheWatcher_:I didn't stop editing its just my ideas are running out I only had 30 chapters or so after that I have to write it, so the main problem is the lack of story line. I could stop posting for 2-3 weeks and prepare a storyline then I would be able to solely focus on editing the chapters not thinking about what to do next. I appreciate your view and I myself know That I have reduced editing the chapters.
thats why I am focusing on storyline more now.
Spelloyal:I didn't know how to put it into words, but the problem is exactly the storyline as you said. If you want to focus on writing a good fic, my advice is to take your time and post on forums like Questionablequesting and Spacebattles, there daily chapters are not the norm so no one will complain about slower updates.
