he mc can't seem to make up his mind and acts like a immatured teenager with mood swings. The dialogues flow unnaturally and none of the characters have a stable personality. They are made as like a side character from a harem anime, lacking depth and substance. unrelatable and dragged out in the boring parts
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LIKEwait but why is mc still childish when he's a war veteran and a trained spy ??
I guess you missed the part where he's not a normal soldier. And where did I ever write that he's a trained spy? Anyway, his personality makes sense. If you don't like it, that's one thing, but it makes sense.