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FruceLv44mth
2024-10-05 18:51

he mc can't seem to make up his mind and acts like a immatured teenager with mood swings. The dialogues flow unnaturally and none of the characters have a stable personality. They are made as like a side character from a harem anime, lacking depth and substance. unrelatable and dragged out in the boring parts

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JALLENAuthor

The MC has a clear personality, and if you hadn't noticed his "childish/unserious" personality from the first chapters. I can't really help you. As for the rest, it's your opinion. I can't say too much about that apart from that I disagree with you.

sensei_jLv1

wait but why is mc still childish when he's a war veteran and a trained spy ??

JALLEN:The MC has a clear personality, and if you hadn't noticed his "childish/unserious" personality from the first chapters. I can't really help you. As for the rest, it's your opinion. I can't say too much about that apart from that I disagree with you.
JALLENAuthor

I guess you missed the part where he's not a normal soldier. And where did I ever write that he's a trained spy? Anyway, his personality makes sense. If you don't like it, that's one thing, but it makes sense.

sensei_j:wait but why is mc still childish when he's a war veteran and a trained spy ??
Olaniyan_omoolaLv12

like seriously 😒

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