Writing quality is above average, tho the author is human and he sometimes makes mistakes. Story development was going good with the introduction of marigold and its counterpart, but it fell off in the last chapter with the introduction of the two messed up couple. Nate not finding them in earlier chapters is understandable (he is a kid) but when they disbanded his strength skyrocketed during his time as an intergalactic hero(able to give life to planets, destroy an advanced civilization's army alone, and communicate and teleport to people from earth while in space) he should've found out about them. And even if Nate couldn't have know, i would imagine the old man(Nate's adoptive father the multi billionaire) would've kept tap of the other children he didn't buy if he knew how dangerous they could be. Character design is great, mc looks awesome, and the Pheonix is a beauty. Updating Stability is now in 1 star due to it being dropped (or so a commenter said) World Background was starting to get good, but because of the plothole i mentioned earlier(Story development) i will lower it to two stars. Ps. I hope this get rewritten as i haven't seen much Umbrella Academy fanfic in this app.
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