Absolutely amazing! Reasons 1. From shadow ( should say a lot) 2. Amazing portrayal and plot 3. First umbrella academy fic I’ve seen but I still love 4. I read on patreon where it has at least double current chapters and where you should read too 5. Like usual from shadow he does in depth research before writing which means a lot of this stuff is true (warning some stuff is still changed as this is a fanfic)
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nah he said ben died 17 show he died 14 flaw 1 fic awful with the romance and allison kid being Op 2, 3 you being bias
Yes I’m being bias because I like this author but this fic isn’t awful. 1. It’s a fic of course there changes 2. It’s seems you kinda just want to bash on Allison and her kid which is understandable 3. I would like to see you write romance with a being that lives inside your head and then you can come talk to me
write romance with an being inside of my head?? confused there and the allison bashing is only on her kid why is she having wishes so great and op by the mc statements if theres an ritual or birthday. 3 the fic isn't all that he had the character perfect, story an little eh could've been better/ improvised more. 4 if you saying write romance author straight up skipped ahead and just got mc with phoenix who nobody was asking or even wanted as an FL i hate oc's as they take all the possible intreast the Mc could've been with.
and then come talk to me? what justification is that doing🤣🤣🤣 ur not the author and being bias even agreeing to some of my point you seemed but hurt by your 3rd point other than that you were acting civil and rational🤨
