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2024-09-16 07:38

The story progression is good so far with thr plot and the excitement for new chapters still there, thr only thing negative abojt this novel is the subpar lemon scenes. Better write something romantic than write low quality lemons acenes since it doesn't really create any aort of excitement rvrn when reading it when in fact such scenes are supposed to excite us not bore us.

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