My main issue is simply too much or too many random chapters mixed in that basically interrupt the story, and isn’t the story. While normally I’d not make comments, nor would I make a review, but I wanted to say, mostly to the author of this book then to others. This book is good. Has high chance to make it big, but there’s spelling issues that make it a bit annoying at times but that’s not super big issue per say, but the fact that you go and make an entire chapter about asking why your not getting power stones, is something that kinda makes people feel demotivated to read the book. Then adding more chapters, honestly I normally don’t say much. Normally limit my comments…but I don’t like when I’m in middle of reading a book then have a random note talking about something pop up. I wouldn’t mind if it was temporarily there, before basically archived or deleted, but…it’s annoying to look at a book with over 20 chapters but having only 17 or 29 with only 26. Get interrupted even when reading. (I do have a hard time putting words out properly but yeah). Otherwise, it’s a good book, with a lot of potential, and I do hope it continues and gets better. Hopefully you can even fix the spelling mistakes too so that in future you don’t have them or don’t have them as much. Like every chapter has one maybe two. Not big deal tho nor big issue but still. Either way, good job so far, and hoping for the best, and keep up the good work!
