Olay so the story is a little rough in the start as i wrote it some time ago and there is a slight change in MHA Continuity. I've made Midnight a hero like red riot someoen that inspired another generation ie the canon one. Mc will stream many type of content but starting is generally gaming mixed with the ARG. Mc also has a life and a charachter so please don't take my life if you see some chapter where i spend time to make you understand him and the people around him.

My main issue is simply too much or too many random chapters mixed in that basically interrupt the story, and isn’t the story. While normally I’d not make comments, nor would I make a review, but I wanted to say, mostly to the author of this book then to others. This book is good. Has high chance to make it big, but there’s spelling issues that make it a bit annoying at times but that’s not super big issue per say, but the fact that you go and make an entire chapter about asking why your not getting power stones, is something that kinda makes people feel demotivated to read the book. Then adding more chapters, honestly I normally don’t say much. Normally limit my comments…but I don’t like when I’m in middle of reading a book then have a random note talking about something pop up. I wouldn’t mind if it was temporarily there, before basically archived or deleted, but…it’s annoying to look at a book with over 20 chapters but having only 17 or 29 with only 26. Get interrupted even when reading. (I do have a hard time putting words out properly but yeah). Otherwise, it’s a good book, with a lot of potential, and I do hope it continues and gets better. Hopefully you can even fix the spelling mistakes too so that in future you don’t have them or don’t have them as much. Like every chapter has one maybe two. Not big deal tho nor big issue but still. Either way, good job so far, and hoping for the best, and keep up the good work!

well its more of a smut than system novel, there is more chapters about his aunt and problems in family than actual system/streamimg stuff. have a potential, but like most of streamimg novels it just dont live to the expectation, will give it a 3.5 still, for idea and for hope that it will get better later.

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pretty good story but it does have some plot holes and some grammatical errors but nothing to the point where you cant read it

Really enjoyed everything so far, it's really unique. Can't wait to see what happens. Keep cooking author!

i had to read this mha streamer fic and spreading brainrot across the multiverse peak 20/10 p.s(haven't even read one chp interesting premise)

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the story is very good and is keeping me hooked up ... but David and Galactus prime don't have much emotional connections, like two different personas with two different stories just mixed together. right now it is fine but later these plot holes will be too big to just ignore ... don't wanna have a good wn dropped ..