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Klipsch
KlipschLv18mth
2024-09-07 04:21

You are doing a great job by translating this novel but it's good to stick to one name for the MC instead of alternating between Ethan, Don and Tang it causes typos which reduces interest in the novel.

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Anobody
AnobodyAuthor

can you point out the mistakes I'll edit right way

Klipsch
KlipschLv1

Well in some pages you wrote different names like Tang De, Don for the MC.

Anobody:can you point out the mistakes I'll edit right way
AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Yep in some places it’s Donde in next paragraph it’s Ethan and in the beginning of chapter it was tang

Anobody:can you point out the mistakes I'll edit right way
Trafford
TraffordLv6

Romance and pairing?

Anobody:can you point out the mistakes I'll edit right way
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