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2024-09-19 04:58

One heck of a book that checked off a lot for a decent novel. Fantasy, reincarnation. Yep, it's all there. MC's kind of funny, too. Like the title implies, there's a lot of evil and unexpected twists that deals with exorcists. The novel's strengths lie in its characters and a solidly-paced narrative. I think how Eden interacts with his younger siblings really brings out his character. If there's any advice I can give to the author, it's to not rush the plot points. Make it less predictable. The book's new, after all.

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Thank you for the review and advice. I shall heed to it.

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Author here :] Once upon a time, I decided to write a book and now it's growing in my yard! "First: What's the book about? Many things, the story revolves around all the characters. But, the main character- specifically: Gojin, Who reincarnated into a novel - more of a webtoon (Just used the "novel" since it's suitable) From a overworked human to a...read more." "Second: Is this going to be worth some time and gifts? Depends on the readers taste as the first 28th chapter, might be cringe and follow the JJK path, but later it becomes.........- However, yes, it's worth your time and large gifts if you see it the way our lovely fans do!" "3rd Pov: How strong is Gojin and the other characters going to grow - also the world building, how is it? Well, got this questions from my cute readers - The answer is: The world building is simply to large and it's still undergoing development, character development is complex as they might be two anti-hero but one is visible: Gojin. On how strong the characters are to grow: It’s not determined, Gojin might look over the top, beyond overpowered and all, but he will still grow beyond that. Kenji, Sakura and so many other characters are also bound to be something soon...beyond the webnovel character base." "4th Pov: Is there any harem, plus romance? That's a tricky question in the romance part, but for the other one - NO! It's against my home training and cultural beliefs of my country to write such things. Although, You might see a lot of mangas from here, doing so, proudly! They're the black sheeps, so let them be! We still love them. Romance might be late, maybe, not ever to happen as such a story like this as no space for love, it's all about...you know the word. But, let's see how it goes!" "What Pov is this: How many chapters is this planning to attain? 1000 chapters plus, but more support, gives me more inspiration and this might just get to 3000! One big goal with many years of writing :)" "Ninth Pov!? : Leave your questions below, and I will do my best to answer! About the Discord server: It’s still on hold till about the second volume." I sincerely apologise for the chapters being locked so early. Chapter 36, I think. Unlock this chapters, please! And,.please get privilege (1) My writing style is developing the more I write, soon - Might just be close to Shakespeare. A adage by a character in this book - Be prepared for the unspoken, live for the history. But don't strive to be a legend, rather be the story people can't locate, be the mystery behind people's heart. Create another word, legends are storyline people tend to say they respect but they throw this so called, away. Then, fill me in "What's the meaning of a legend?" Answer this in the reply sect, under this review, and leave your beautiful comments! Love all of you deeply ❤

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