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_Harsh_Lv142mth
2024-09-10 22:23

honestly i can't get past the first chapter , with him asking those trashy things for wishes as a RI fan and if he is only this smart he should die just after arriving smh

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RI_RI_RI
RI_RI_RILv2

U want an op mc ?

_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

i just don't want mc to seem brain-dead ,if you want to give those things to mc ,you can just make it so that he spins a gatcha wheel ,throws a dice or god just gives it to him or something similar

RI_RI_RI:U want an op mc ?
false_truth
false_truthAuthor

You are absolutely right. I also thought that at the beginning, if I could have one wish, it would be to have the power to make the heaven will obey me or to achieve supreme in all paths. BUT On one hand, I imagine a main character who has a little cheat that will help him in the upcoming changes in the plot while On the other hand, I couldn't use something like gacha wheel, as the specific third wish is a must. . Anyway thanks for your feedback, I will try to edit the chapters to solve this.

CreedFollower
CreedFollowerLv4

Yeah i kinda turned of my brain in that chapter and for now what comes after seems to be good but also a lot is stil following the original plot so could be that🤔 Any ways i give it a chance since is RI and it seems good

YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Well it seems for now apart from that

YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Good*

YourDad_:Well it seems for now apart from that
Yuan_crafty
Yuan_craftyLv2

Focus on writing more chapters Editing come last

false_truth:You are absolutely right. I also thought that at the beginning, if I could have one wish, it would be to have the power to make the heaven will obey me or to achieve supreme in all paths. BUT On one hand, I imagine a main character who has a little cheat that will help him in the upcoming changes in the plot while On the other hand, I couldn't use something like gacha wheel, as the specific third wish is a must. . Anyway thanks for your feedback, I will try to edit the chapters to solve this.
Yuan_crafty
Yuan_craftyLv2

In ch6 things getting changed

CreedFollower:Yeah i kinda turned of my brain in that chapter and for now what comes after seems to be good but also a lot is stil following the original plot so could be that🤔 Any ways i give it a chance since is RI and it seems good
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