honestly i can't get past the first chapter , with him asking those trashy things for wishes as a RI fan and if he is only this smart he should die just after arriving smh
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LIKEYou are absolutely right. I also thought that at the beginning, if I could have one wish, it would be to have the power to make the heaven will obey me or to achieve supreme in all paths. BUT On one hand, I imagine a main character who has a little cheat that will help him in the upcoming changes in the plot while On the other hand, I couldn't use something like gacha wheel, as the specific third wish is a must. . Anyway thanks for your feedback, I will try to edit the chapters to solve this.
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false_truth:You are absolutely right. I also thought that at the beginning, if I could have one wish, it would be to have the power to make the heaven will obey me or to achieve supreme in all paths. BUT On one hand, I imagine a main character who has a little cheat that will help him in the upcoming changes in the plot while On the other hand, I couldn't use something like gacha wheel, as the specific third wish is a must. . Anyway thanks for your feedback, I will try to edit the chapters to solve this.