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Humbuub
HumbuubLv41mth
2024-09-28 19:51

3-2-3-5-5 Writing is okay, there are similar terms written differently, and sometimes they mistake on the same chapter. Story is below average to me. IDKW I kept seeing 5 stars when there's barely any story in it. almost 50 chapters in and we're still on 2nd day in Hogwarts. Pacing is super slow. I like MC most of the time, too bad he went the simp road. Updates are fast. World Background is probably the best part of this fic, most theory and MC's inner monologue about The Wizarding World is spot on.

Hogwarts' White Lord

HornyFBI
4.6
106 Chs

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BeastNaBh
BeastNaBhLv3

Just one word is all I need to speak of this fanfics excellence and that's "perfect". This fic DON'T need me to over glorify it's nature to others because it speaks for itself.

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KuNaLsAmA
KuNaLsAmALv3

Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plot😅💀

2mth
Mindlessreader25
Mindlessreader25Lv12

I gotta say one of the best HP fanfic I have ever read ....

2mth
YoungMagister
YoungMagisterLv3

Damn! Finally, someone who understands the lore of HP books. Most of the fkers start writing fics just from watching the movies... This is great,

2mth
Matrhin
MatrhinLv15

A great read and if I saw this story sooner I’d given my stones to you.😅

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Usiel
UsielLv13

Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.

1mth
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.

1mth
Yesnth
YesnthLv4

Y'know, I went into this expecting nothing. But damn did I get hooked. This story is one of the few that captivates you and pulls you in. It captures the feel of the Harry Potter books perfectly in how magical everything seems. Although this is a translated work, it does not change that it is a work that needs to be appreciated. The Writing quality, or better yet, translation quality is impeccable. you can't even tell its a translated work unless something really particular pops up. The story development is great. although hard to stick to in the first 10 chapters, when it gets rolling, oh it gets rolling. I couldn't even tell how fast I read through this and when I reached the end it left me craving for more. The Characters are very nicely interpreted. all of them capture the Essence of the originals and even the side characters feel like they're alive. although sometimes it may feel like the side characters glaze the Mc too much, that's just part of the fun and is framed as being perfectly logical. The updating stability is good. not much to say about it. There is a chapter every day. As for the World Background, this is literally the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read that takes many elements from the books too. Everyone else just watches the movies and calls it a day in terms of research. this is very well fletched out and the gaps in knowledge are allowed to be filled in by the author. all in all, 5/5. One of the best, if not the best fanfics, I've read on the platform. It simply draws you in and doesn't let go. would recommended.

1mth
abc_logan
abc_loganLv14

everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it

1mth
MilkLover
MilkLoverLv3

A hard find [img=nervous]. It seems to be well thought and has a lot of potential 🔥🔥

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