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Garland
GarlandLv42mth
2024-09-10 22:43

While interesting with the whole concept of the MC "returning" to Earth, things kinda dipped a little with how uninteresting, annoyine and eye-rolling the MC can be. I kinda understand his frustration but the whole cursing thing felt kinda one of those things added just to make the story mature. Also the whole concentration of fawning over how handsome he is was just annoying, we get it he is handsome but i don't need the characters mentioning it in situations where it doesn't really need to be their.

A Hero Who Returns But Is Out Of Place

Poponioko
4.6
124 Chs

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Poponioko
PoponiokoAuthor

Okay, input accepted. So you want me to not emphasize the mc's handsomeness too much in the future. Is that right?

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Garland
GarlandLv4

It's not much about him being called handsome but the constant pandering and praising either by the characters or the narrative. This was more obvious in the early chapters.

Poponioko:Okay, input accepted. So you want me to not emphasize the mc's handsomeness too much in the future. Is that right?
2mth
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Poponioko
PoponiokoAuthor

In the first chapter, it is necessary to include the MC's appearance from a different perspective. It shows the charm of the MC itself in that world, so according to it, it doesn't bother too much so that the next one isn't as frequent as the first chapters, but it also has to include a little more of the MC's charm in some of the romantic moments.

Garland:It's not much about him being called handsome but the constant pandering and praising either by the characters or the narrative. This was more obvious in the early chapters.
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Garland
GarlandLv4

It just feels forced at times and really uncessary for the moment. Nothing about him really exudes that charming personality and it feels like everything especially with the whole romance aspect just feels forced.

Poponioko:In the first chapter, it is necessary to include the MC's appearance from a different perspective. It shows the charm of the MC itself in that world, so according to it, it doesn't bother too much so that the next one isn't as frequent as the first chapters, but it also has to include a little more of the MC's charm in some of the romantic moments.
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Five stars for my own story! I don't know why not many readers gave a rating even though it means a lot to me, because from there I know the readers' views on my story, and from there I can improve the quality of my story. Then, I am also more enthusiastic to continue the story until the end because there is motivation thanks to the readers' corrections.

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