I have to say that writing itself is good but I think you are making the mc a bit too overpowered like his pokemon knowing advanced pokemon moves without even training just after reaching viridian city pokemon centre is too much for me. (his pidgeotto knowing ariel ace and riolu knowing aura sphere) And character intaraction between mc and others with team rocket for the first time is a bit weird as it give feeling that they know them even before meeting them. And I also want to know if mc has transmigarated / reincarnated.
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Rilou inherited its moves from Blaze and Ash father, who had trained it rigorously before leaving. As for Pidgeotto, it might be overpowered now, but I plan to ensure that new Pokémon will take time to master their moves. In terms of the interaction between Blaze and Team Rocket, Team Rocket witnessed Blaze’s battle with Ash against a flock of Spearow. Impressed by Blaze's and Ash strength and eager to exploit it, they devised a plan to steal their Pokémon.
Blaze isn’t a transmigrated or reincarnated; it’s more like a being in parallel universe.
well I can understand about riolu but pidgeotto is really overpowered right know man , Truthfully I read your pokemon battle it was really good but their overpowered strength without giving any reason like (age, alpha gene, king gene or just potential) which are the usual method for making someone is really like giving blaze everything on a silver platter while ash has to do more effort. Right I have read up to defeating team rocket part and it really is feeling like journeying with blaze is hindering ash's potential even though I know Blaze will help ash improve in someway and make him stronger than his cannon part. The truth is that the starting has just disappointed me that I can no longer continue to read it, It is not your fault you really tried to write to write a good poke fic but it is not what I hope from a pokemon fanfic that I like
Vivid_Horizons:Rilou inherited its moves from Blaze and Ash father, who had trained it rigorously before leaving. As for Pidgeotto, it might be overpowered now, but I plan to ensure that new Pokémon will take time to master their moves. In terms of the interaction between Blaze and Team Rocket, Team Rocket witnessed Blaze’s battle with Ash against a flock of Spearow. Impressed by Blaze's and Ash strength and eager to exploit it, they devised a plan to steal their Pokémon.
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Vivid_Horizons:Rilou inherited its moves from Blaze and Ash father, who had trained it rigorously before leaving. As for Pidgeotto, it might be overpowered now, but I plan to ensure that new Pokémon will take time to master their moves. In terms of the interaction between Blaze and Team Rocket, Team Rocket witnessed Blaze’s battle with Ash against a flock of Spearow. Impressed by Blaze's and Ash strength and eager to exploit it, they devised a plan to steal their Pokémon.
