DaoMaster_Aizen35

Well written chapter could have been better with more emotion added

I agree with pikachu on that one personally I prefer sarena but kalos is long way to go but considering ash will be 17-18 by that point then sarena is perfect so I would prefer if you would make Austin interact with a level of friend or best friend until the fl is decided, and just don't make every poke girl fall for him it will be annoying here at least there is reason for ash in doing so Original fl would be nice too

Then it's fine I guess I really like your fanfic better than some top ranked ones hope you reach full potential here and try patreon if you will

bro I heard rumors that webnovel have contracts which very strict and they will have rights over ur novel and ip and u can't publish it else where I don't know if it's true or not but pe carefull around the contracts and also start a patreon if you can.

Right!!! since goku willingly dies during cell games so that earth can be protected from enemies after him so, It will only be reasonable for him to ask ajax to take care of his son as a godfather I don't think this version of goku(ur goku) will react any differently unless ajax beat some sense to him *cough* preach him It could be a better idea as he will be able to train day and night and ssj3 will be easier, Otherwise It will be harder

just name him guy and if you plan to get second fighting type name him lee

um trekking Sound interesting I should try that sometimes share ur experience abt it

dumbledore vibes

is this translation ? harem?

can u do something like universe merger or something like iron man in iron verse(Ik it sounds lame) or something more into space intergalactic like reason for giving humanity quirks was to help them overcome a certain world ending problem. just anything cause mha story plotlines are boring and since we now are already in uncharted territories why don't you start experimenting with something more than just mha or mcu why not something original with character you already knew and something more original what I would like to see would be some good things and plot from mcu, star Wars and inter-space sci fi novel