First time making a review so I’ll just say this. The story is good. The updates are are about two chapters a day which is good, length of chapters are also good. Writing quality is also good, besides a ghosts name which keeps changing from what I saw. The only bad thing in my opinion is that there is two protagonists, and in my opinion the proper protagonists has nothing special about him being having a good D, and maybe rich I forgot. Xia wenxue, the 25% protagonist, can be said to be a normal protagonist with nothing special about him on the outside, but actually has supernatural strength and talent, like having a super computer like mind (don’t know what else as well yet). Some of the heroines have supernatural like senses and strength as well, and they also seem to have ghost companions as well but are in a coma right now. Ye shengge, the 75% protagonist, however seems to have nothing special about him besides having a bigger D. He has no supernatural strength or senses, and no powerful people who will help him if xia wenxue or the heroines want to kill him. He may be a little smart but nothing like a super computer. And while the some of the heroines have fallen, and have s*x with him, they don’t actually care about him or loyal to him, even though he calls them slaves. He also lets them still have s*x with xia wenxue, which I understand is so xia wenxue doesn’t suspect anything and kills ye shengge, its kind of annoying that he has to hide scared that xia wenxue will kill him when ye shengge is ment to be the proper protagonist. I hope that this in the future changes and the heroines stop having s*x xia wenxue and ye shengge actually gets stronger to protect himself. Besides this, the novel is good. Also there could be a bit more information about the world and the powers of people and ghosts, as it will allow us to understand stand xia wenxue and the heroines strength, and it will also allow ye Shengge to get some strength, if he gets any at all in the story.
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Later, he gets something, but the main issue is that Ye Shenge is weak and uses plans as a normal person, and the other one is strong, but his women moan under another man. In short, this novel has bad grammar and no deep story, and I don't need its popularity. I'm a reader myself and I'm really tired of repetitive novels. I wanted there to be something for the few people who are like me to read. There are probably 300-400 or much more novels of the type you mentioned, and they have much better grammar or plot, but you are reading my novel and that is enough for me. thank you
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