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DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4Lv42mth
2024-09-14 01:51

no need for 2 mc.........you have ruined the novel

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ALEXDJ
4.2
155 Chs

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ALEXDJ
ALEXDJAuthor

It feels different because I just confirmed that Xia is also a MC, otherwise there are many novels where MCs steal women from the protagonist. If I want to write the same, what is the difference with them? To be honest, this novel will not be paid for and it will remain as it is for people who like different things to read, if 10 people read it, I have no problem. And thanks for the comment

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enzo456
enzo456Lv4

fk this

1mth
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ALEXDJ
ALEXDJAuthor

I am a reader myself and I have been looking for a good novel for almost a year and I almost got depressed. All are repetitive and things that the majority likes. Nothing special - if it is, then 90% of the novel is just filler topics like character development, family and friends - romance - building a kingdom or army - topics about what is good and what is bad - oh slapping in the face I don't have the ability to write an epic novel, but I can give the minority who like this kind of thing something to read.

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Guilty666
Guilty666Lv13

The novel is very good but it seems that the author has a strange fetish, it's better to make ye shengge the main MC rather than the 75-25 damn, and make xia wanyue the protagonist of OG whose harem is kidnapped by ye shengge isn't this included in NTR because wanyue has 25% lol

2mth
Bzbam24
Bzbam24Lv14

loving the novel so far, one of my favorite genres and the way the mc takes the women is top tier. keep it up author.

2mth
Swordsmasta
SwordsmastaLv14

Excellent novel, definitely my favourite in the genre. Eagerly waiting for more chapters. Keep it up author!

23d
DaoistL2fnAm
DaoistL2fnAmLv11

I like the format, a novel with a protagonist (75%) like Ye Shengge would be incredible, where he was the bully at school, without powers, if he only had a very powerful family

1mth
Amit_Raj_8672
Amit_Raj_8672Lv3

overall a nice manipulation erotic read, obviously we aren't for a super mystery kind of story 😈

22d
DaoBeginning
DaoBeginningLv4

i just left it here author, this novel is better NTR novel than your last one

23d
DaoistL2fnAm
DaoistL2fnAmLv11

I like the novel and the format of 2 protagonists, Ye Shengge being the best for me, it is excellent, something I would have liked is that the number of women will be expanded, I think 6 is very few [img=update]

23d
Degenerate_daoist
Degenerate_daoistLv3

poor grammar and translations but great work author . i am already use to with mtls 😆

23d
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