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HandsomeKimDokjaLv125mth
2024-09-27 19:01

Well i dont have thing to say after star war reference mann its good writing is awesome and bus_kun is always on time at night but thier should have lot details of him crushing underneath the bus_kun and a lil shocking and all and he should have adjusted as a captain more early as if his wish comes true but just ignore me its realy good and on top of harem what more we cultured people need😎😎

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Thanks for the feedback. I might go in and make it adjust a little faster. And yes, we have a harem and bus-kun, so what more could you ask for? 😉👍

HandsomeKimDokjaLv12

HaremKing777:Thanks for the feedback. I might go in and make it adjust a little faster. And yes, we have a harem and bus-kun, so what more could you ask for? 😉👍
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