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2024-09-14 06:32

At first, I started to love the story and started to think about how the Holy Son would take revenge on these two, but we reached chapter 20 and nothing happened, and on top of all that, I was forced to read 3 or 4 chapters whose heroes are these two. So my evaluation of it: If the Holy Son had not destroyed these two in the most horrific ways within a few chapters, I will admit that this novel would have been the best, but now I can say that it is the worst of all and I do not recommend it.

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Unfettered_Soul
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Fellow Daoist, thank you for your review. I have taken note of what you said regarding the number of chapters written for Ye Chen and the others. I just want readers to understand that in the beginning, everyone is coming from a very neutral ground. They really have no enmity. But now, something is pushing Ye Chen against Jiang Hou. Later, Jiang Hou would also... However, the issue of revenge is not something that can be considered now. First, there's not enough reason to justify his actions. In the beginning, Jiang Hou was your typical innocent and simple person who was just Cultivating for the fun. But slowly, the world will reveal it's cruelty to him, as it's already doing. Put yourself in his shoes. You have an enemy who can destroy you in a moment if he so desires. You also have a grudge against someone less powerful than you, but the grudge has not developed into a life and death situation. Which one would be of concern to you? You may say, "But Ye Chen can become powerful all of a sudden, he is a genius". But I'll say, "Jiang Hou is more of a genius, and someone who is awakening from his slumber"

Unfettered_Soul
Unfettered_SoulAuthor

Okay, I get your point now. You have my thoughts. If you read chapters 23 and 24, you will know that he has started pretending now

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Unfettered_SoulAuthor

@DaoistRpvmde Please contact me

Unfettered_Soul
Unfettered_SoulAuthor

Thank you Young Master. It's really helpful. I thought I had deleted your comment, but here we are. Cause of power supply, my system has been down. My phone does not display this. I have taken note, and I am working on my development. You don't have to worry. Those two guys are not his true enemy like you've seen from the development so far, so he's not going to spend eternity fighting them.

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This is what DaoistRpvmde wrote earlier: ok firstly thank you for replying secondly the girl he live betrayed him and she was making him as a joke is that's not a situation to take an action to take revenge to show them what he can do The most thing that will make him less noticeable is for the powerful people to see him running after those who insulted him and eliminating them. This will make them know that he is still the same person and did not suspect anything. Secondly, I hope that if you want to keep these two alive for 10 chapters or something, I hope that you do not exaggerate in making them strong and do not show them in many chapters because I feel disgusted by these forms and their frequent appearance or exaggeration in their development will make me leave the novel even though I liked it and I liked the hero and I liked the idea of ​​developing the element of evil within him to reach the rank of the greatest villain ..and thank u and month i will try to give u the golden card

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