shehab_reda

I will give my honest evaluation:: First, the writing style needs development. There is unnecessary talk, and there are sentences that I did not understand. Second, the progress in the story is very, very slow. Third, you marked the villain in the class, but if you call sacrificing a person evil, then you need to review yourself. Evil is killing. Evil is exploiting every atom of a person. Evil is an evil technique with which you can…

i don't like it....... .... ...................

but actually, i read (crazy blood demon)before, and i don't like

ok I'll take a look 👀 🤔

After reading Chapter 25: I hope you remove the #dark and #villain tags because they do not express the novel even a little. The novel is about reincarnation and a good hero who gives his friends all his work and is also not selfish. I personally entered the novel because of the villain tag and I did not find even an atom of evil in the MC, so I hope you remove them and stop deceiving us.😡

keep going 💪 i love it ...... But there are some things first, can you make him more evil second, I hope you arrange the world system and its levels and the natural limit of power so we can see how strong our hero is in relation to them and I also hope you explain what is the benefit of a lot (x) of purification in the blood or chi or bones and how it will affect him in the short and long term third, I hope you keep this work away from romance because it spoils the works and make the hero as selfish as possible and thanks for the story 🙏 you're a good writer 💪

👋 hi It's a good story. i liked the mc character and his power Continue to make the MC more evil and powerful and show us scenes of him killing people who trusted him and destroying worlds because they mistreated him, also please stay away from the romance I have no problem if the MC gathers the women of the world but do not make it a disgusting romantic and do not make him give what is his to his women, his women are his alone so he can enjoy them and use them as tools and carry out the tasks of the regime, also if you want him to encourage them and make them obey him make it either by force or by control techniques and if they do something big like killing the son of destiny themselves he should reward them like one pill from the pills that help them.... And thanks for the novel your skills are wonderful keep going

why it was a great one 😔

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Continue but stay away from romance and don't let him care about his women too much (women are just tools) and also increase the degree of his evil actions. (Honestly, one of the things I didn't like the most in the novel is that he had a daughter. How can he, at this age and with this strength, still give birth to a girl with this ease?) Other than that, his wife benefits more than he does, and no villain would accept to let someone benefit from him except for a price, and most likely this price is that after the benefit ends, he kills him. **Have you heard of Fang Yuan before?**