shehab_reda

When will he turn evil (#villain like the tag you put)?

awesome 👌

i wish to be a real evil villain 🙏

and i gonna stop reading and support here .. ... she killed him and what he do .. eating the all kingdom to protect and save her ..... how that's even possible and you say that's he a villain.... sorry, but if you continue like that, just stop writing stories with #villain tag .....

i wish to see him kill his sister and to get her talent *(Thas will make him a real villain)*

you should delete #villain tag ok, he was a villain/demon lord but why do you make him like that? He becomes so soft and good (kind) how does a great demon he was killing for fun become a good person??????? you need to recheck your mind .....bro

a good stsrtup 👌 but you need to focus on how villainous he is i like when he doesn't care about any thing he is the one and only i will that he will be stronger fast my be op 💪💪💪

that is not a villain mc you should delete (villain) from there and the mc is not power enough You have to check yourself ===================================

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firstly, good job, it is a good story but there is something you need to focus on 1. It's a villain story you need to make the mc more evil 2. The story is so slow ,you need to speed it 3. the mc doesn't have something special he must have a blood line or something 4. the system is not generous with mc and hve no good features 5. it's a villain novel with villain mc you must make him more OP .....thank u for the novel, and keep going ......