I will be completely honest with my opinion -: 1) system is useless(you will know if you read till chapter 20) . 2) story starts with a high node with basic information about world to understand MC circumstances along with dangers around him and just when you gets excited to see how MC will escape *boom* your MC is gone. 3) Suddenly we are reading about a boy then a girl about whom we don't know(I understand author that he wants to bring suspense but it just kills the attachment with MC) . 4) the story got messy the movement another mc(in game) gets his memories. #this is a story which requires at least above 1000 chapters to fill plot hole, so I will come back after at least 300 chapters.
Liked by 4 people
LIKEI appreciate your honest review. 😊 Regarding the system, well... I can't say too much since it's only the beginning of the story, and revealing anything now would be a spoiler. As for the impromptu memories, they’re necessary to prevent an info dump later on. These early parts of the story, which extend up to the academy arc, serve as the introduction. That’s when the story truly begins. Rest assured, all plot holes will be addressed in due time.
just don't jump POV so abruptly it really kills the whole mood
Secretly_A_Villian:I appreciate your honest review. 😊 Regarding the system, well... I can't say too much since it's only the beginning of the story, and revealing anything now would be a spoiler. As for the impromptu memories, they’re necessary to prevent an info dump later on. These early parts of the story, which extend up to the academy arc, serve as the introduction. That’s when the story truly begins. Rest assured, all plot holes will be addressed in due time.