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Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv41mth
2024-12-09 18:09

my opinion, Author you messed up pretty bad. Keep the plot simple and no plot armor and forced plot. It would be 5/5. I promise.

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Secretly_A_Villian
Secretly_A_VillianAuthor

Bro, I am literally rewriting it, didn't you see the synopsis do please edit this review when I am done

Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4

sure, I enjoyed your writing... msg me when done, I will reread your fic. 😁

Secretly_A_Villian:Bro, I am literally rewriting it, didn't you see the synopsis do please edit this review when I am done
DivineChild
DivineChildLv4

you didn't [img=golden ticket]

Novel_Guru:sure, I enjoyed your writing... msg me when done, I will reread your fic. 😁
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