What's wrong?

?? what are you doing here

he repeats this meme

a friend told me about this novel but it ain't my cup of tea. Maybe I should just annoy AbiLIon for some spoilers 😂 wanna join?

I indeed did

Nah, I feel sorry for this guy, I don't want to bother him too much.

...was that too much?

a little bit,but I'm also interested in what kind of past the ether has

You're talking about Ether from Lackey's seducing survival odyssey?? or who?

of course it is he

is there a reason why it's not to your liking esteemed reader

Light... this's the wrong novel😭 Imma Annoy Abi in his server

idk about him. personally... this novel is not very good. reasons:- 1. system's or rather your preference for the so called 'all around best woman'. v girls give 100 pts while other gives 200. even normal one give 200. smh. 2. mc is an i di ot. he was talking with his sister about his grand secret plans, classified information and other stuff out in the open. that too without lowering his voice or whispering. ofc someone's gonna listen and probably use it against mc or black mail him. it happened cos of his st upidity. even his sister is st upid. why? cos she didn't stop mc rather kept asking for info. mc got 2 lives worth of experience. and his sister is born and raised in that world. ffs. they don't have common sense. like even a normal middle schooler with common sense wouldn't tell his secret or stuff to others in public. at the very least even if he did he would whisper. mc got himself recorded smh. shows how smart he really is. not to mention. that world is magic with super advance technology, so privcay is more at risk. where people cos of mana got supernatural hearing. people can spy on other with certain abilites. mc with his status should be more careful as who knows? maybe his or his family's enemies are spying on him? or maybe his mother asked someone to spy him? or smth like that. even if he wanted to disclose stuff, he should have did it in room. cos his room given his status should have extra protection for noice isol ation and against spying. mc is careless. 3. that girl send that audio. smh that was a bit forced. like when mc grabbed her. she absent mindely opened her phone. sleceted that audio and sent it. noice. and also could have handled this stuff slightly differently. 4. the way mc got that girl is forced 5. The audio getting send and it's consequences that mc will have are super forced. its like you didn't know what to do or you ran out of ideas. so you decided to to go this route .

Pyris didn't care about being heard, what be didn't like is being blackmailed and the way he got Valarie is not forced

and please give it another shot, the novel improves further from where you want to stop, give it another go. if it proves to be not to your liking, let me know

thank you for letting me know, and I will continue to improve this work, just support me. Don't hesitate to point out more of these mistakes, Thank you.

Mc doesnt care about being heard, ah yeah, the typical arrogant MCs who doesnt care about anything living in their own world and then get into a thousand problems because of their arrogance, and then cry about it. All things turn into annyoying poison that could have been save if only MC's IQ was online... Good luck author.. SMH

planning to read this but nevermind, cause your reply shows how stupid/dumb you made the mc.

Everything just feels forced here bro, the way he picks girls and acts as if he care for them deeply when they have just me. U make the MC have a shot temper which isn't good to our liking, like he is angered over simple things like hitting at his sister, bro she is old enough to fend herself. All in all, the novel is actually very promising. But it feels forced, like being a noble is no joke bro but you make it seem like nothing which kills the mystery and curiosity about their background. Anyway what WE request is, make the plot less predictable, less forced towards his love interests, mysterious background by revealing less at a time. A colourful future with interesting story♡♡.

Exactly bro, I liked the potential of this story but the Author ruined it with npcs mentality