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Troy145
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2024-09-24 07:31

tbh i was excited at first about toji vs justice league stuff and toji being toji , it was all good and well until that Supergirl got involved , after that toji was not being toji anymore , and the reason i find the interaction between toji and Supergirl bad is because i thought he isekaied after fighting gojo , that means he has a son which makes the interaction with Supergirl a lot more nonsense because toji doesn't care about anything unless it's his son or late wife, it is a good story but not my cup of tea because when i heard toji i didn't even thought about any romance or relationship . And i don't like how the league binds him just like zenin clan especially when joker runs free after killing thousands but he is not allowed to roam free, the justice league itself is like a private organisation not government , and i don't like them having that much authority and toji is not even supernatural just curse tools

The Magicless Mercenary in Another World: DC x Jujutsu Kaisen

theGoldenGrin
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theGoldenGrin
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thanks for the review. a lot of the points given here were also pointed out in the comments. ive managed to set a direction for how the story will go but specific details of the story gets written as I go. the supergirl x toji concept was a rushed idea. honestly not too sure, id like this to go (tragevy or love story, maybe leave it to a vote in the future). toji wont be joining the justice league so yeah, they'll put a tight leash on him. we'll see how he reacts in the future. also, a lot of people didnt like toji being weak so, we bringing back "not so OP" toji. have to bring in stronger villains to match that though. id be happy to take more of your input as the story progresses. cheers

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Troy145
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thanks for answering my review and i just want to say that you are doing well with the story and you don't have to mind my opinion its's just my opinion nothing else .

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theGoldenGrin
theGoldenGrinAuthor

nah. its comments like these that help me improve my work. thanks mate

Troy145:thanks for answering my review and i just want to say that you are doing well with the story and you don't have to mind my opinion its's just my opinion nothing else .
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