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Threener
ThreenerLv158mth
2024-09-01 20:36

I can't really say if this is good or bad because I got eleven chapters in and then give up because it's not really one I like, the world background and characters can't really be judged because they are just star rail characters so they are already established, the main character on the other hand is the reason I have give up because he is just some delusional moron and got annoying after just one chapter of him, normally I don't mind fanfics like this but for some reason this one just annoyed me, all I can say is for people to try it if you like it you like it if you don't you don't.

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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

i only read 3 chps. is this mc still in his delusion or is he already know that he's transmigrated?

Threener
ThreenerLv15

seemed to still think it's a game by chapter 11 that's when I give up

LunaKindred:i only read 3 chps. is this mc still in his delusion or is he already know that he's transmigrated?
SenatusTheta
SenatusThetaAuthor

He doesn't know he is trasmigrated for a long while, probably till the end.. at least till I read he doesn't know

LunaKindred:i only read 3 chps. is this mc still in his delusion or is he already know that he's transmigrated?
Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

I mean... it's literally what this novel is about. I never get these complaints. if he quickly realized, it would make the theme nothing but clickbait. If he realized midway through the story, it would be jarring as the feel of the second hald of the story would be too different from the first half and would lose a lot of readers. The exception would be if the second half of the story would be about him having to deal with the ramifications of all his stupid actions from the first half. That might actually be kinda fun. I've had the same complaint about stupid reviewers who complained about the MC not knowing about his power in "I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot." The entire theme is about the MC not knowing his power, and everyone else thinking he is just acting and too scared to tell him that, as well as his unintentional influence on the world. If you don't like him failing to realize this is reality, I can't comprehend what your thought process was to start reading this at all.

SenatusTheta:He doesn't know he is trasmigrated for a long while, probably till the end.. at least till I read he doesn't know
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

is he going to be autistic for a long time? i don't mind if mc start flawed and then got character development soon to become a more relatable character but current mc(13 chapter in) is hard to enjoy and also its tough to continue reading about autistic MC like this. if the MC actually become mature or sensible man at some point, i might power reading through this otherwise i'll stop reading this for now.

SenatusTheta:He doesn't know he is trasmigrated for a long while, probably till the end.. at least till I read he doesn't know
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

no one complaint we just expresssing ourselves like how you express yourself in huge wall of text. your comment here is actually legit complaint about people having different taste. we just want to know if the story keep going like this because most of us are busy and rather not invest and waste our time in something we know we won't having fun reading this if this keeps going on. just simple answer yes or no is what we need

Unstable_One:I mean... it's literally what this novel is about. I never get these complaints. if he quickly realized, it would make the theme nothing but clickbait. If he realized midway through the story, it would be jarring as the feel of the second hald of the story would be too different from the first half and would lose a lot of readers. The exception would be if the second half of the story would be about him having to deal with the ramifications of all his stupid actions from the first half. That might actually be kinda fun. I've had the same complaint about stupid reviewers who complained about the MC not knowing about his power in "I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot." The entire theme is about the MC not knowing his power, and everyone else thinking he is just acting and too scared to tell him that, as well as his unintentional influence on the world. If you don't like him failing to realize this is reality, I can't comprehend what your thought process was to start reading this at all.
Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

Complaints and expressing yourself are very much not mutually exclusive. The question of whether the story would continue like this is nearly pointless, because it obviously will. It's the entire point of the story.

Discarded:no one complaint we just expresssing ourselves like how you express yourself in huge wall of text. your comment here is actually legit complaint about people having different taste. we just want to know if the story keep going like this because most of us are busy and rather not invest and waste our time in something we know we won't having fun reading this if this keeps going on. just simple answer yes or no is what we need
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

define 'expressing'

Unstable_One:Complaints and expressing yourself are very much not mutually exclusive. The question of whether the story would continue like this is nearly pointless, because it obviously will. It's the entire point of the story.
Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

Conveying thoughts or feelings by words, gestures, or conduct. Complaints fall under that.

Discarded:define 'expressing'
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