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2024-10-18 13:43

I'm writing this review as of chapter fifty-five: Overall, it's not bad. There's really only a few problems that I have with this novel. One, the world our MC has transmigrated is explained as most likely being the world of a game from his previous life. This is, in my opinion, entirely unnecessary to the plot, especially since it doesn't work in exactly the same way as the game either. The world is a real, living world, but the author still had to include the "game" origin for some reason. Two, it's a harem novel. I mean the MC does have unlimited lifespan, so multiple romantic interests is not surprising, but I wish it weren't multiple at the same time. Hard to take it as seriously, for me at least. I originally had a problem with the MC regaining his sight too early, losing his blindness, but that does become relevant again later in an interesting way, so I guess it's alright.

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