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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv46mth
2024-09-25 01:12

I read some 4-5 WN books today and this by far was the best. The MC feels like a very relatable human being. He's a middle aged man who time-travelled to the past and he acts like one, which is rarely seen in other novels with similar elements. Most of the time, they act like kids despite having the mentality of an adult but this MC, Lucas Tanaka, is well written. The pacing is good as well. It neither hypes the MC too much like Chinese Manhuas and novels nor nerfs him. I hope this novel gets its well deserved recognition. Keep going Author. Great work 💯👏🏽

Soccer System: All the Skills, One Player!

Palmer_1998
4.7
218 Chs

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Palmer_1998
Palmer_1998Author

Thanks for reading and thanks for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying reading it!

6mth
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

real players?? real teams??

5mth
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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

are you on drugs?

Haku_Ouroboros:real players?? real teams??
5mth
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

noo

Mister_Robot:are you on drugs?
5mth
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Lossutra
LossutraLv4

The protagonist doesn’t feel like a middle-aged man, he feels like a teen’s idea of what an old, life-weary middle-aged man is.

5mth
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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

but it's still better than a middle aged man in a kid's body having a go with other kids and sulking. There's a Harry Potter fanfic where the middle aged SI MC transmigrates to the Wizarding World and vents out on Hermione for choosing the company of Harry and Ron over his

Lossutra:The protagonist doesn’t feel like a middle-aged man, he feels like a teen’s idea of what an old, life-weary middle-aged man is.
5mth
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jvvvvvu
jvvvvvuLv3

why harem?????

Palmer_1998:Thanks for reading and thanks for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying reading it!
2mth
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Hundred_Lilies
Hundred_LiliesLv14

I can't remember since I last found and read a great sports novel. The writing quality and storyline are fluid, pleasant to read and with a steady pace. This novel makes me a very happy reader. The MC is first and foremost an adult in a teenager's body, and despite living and aiming for his childhood- teenage dream once again, and perhaps finding love (even if he's mentally older than his peers and perhaps love-interest), the author never loses sight of the MC's beginning as an adult. As a reader, I'm grateful the MC isn't one of those who reverts to being an insufferable man-child with a sudden lack of IQ and maturity. That being said, there's character growth because of the MC's reflective personality. He knows he was an adult before, but that doesn't stop him from living his second life as a teenager, fighting for his dreams and goals, having insecurities like any other human being and working on them - and most of all growing as a person. Keep up the great work, author!

1mth

Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv4

Haven't read this yet but if Lucas Tanaka isn't the best name a protagonist can ever have then I don't know what it.

7mth
Noguenko
NoguenkoLv3

38 chapters read. The writing quality is high. The way of narrating is simple but it keeps the interest in the novel. In 38 chapters I have noticed one mistake... changing the name of a character once (from Lucas to Leo). I hope it was just a lapse. The stability of the updates seems to be correct. The development of the story seems to focus on football only, with certain family and 'loving' touches. The way the story is developing, football fans may like it. But, I see it as very simple. The character design does not seem to be excessively worked on. Which was to be expected, seeing what the story is focusing on at the moment. The MC seems very dependent on the system. If I had to describe the World Background I would say that it is a small fantasy in the real world that we know. We will see how strong the MC system is, and if both worlds will remain balanced. I think a rating of 3.8 is correct for now. As I said, this novel may appeal to football fans. Therefore, I think it should be recommended. PS: the daily mission (Solo Leveling style) seems to have been forgotten.

4mth
as123
as123Lv3

I don't understand how a football fanfic has a harem, maybe a wrong tag? It doesn't matter, it looks interesting, I'll try to read it after I finish reading this author's dxd fanfic

5mth
link03
link03Lv13

great novel, i have read 157 chapters right now and I still wait for updates . nonetheless there are still some things that need something that the author seems to forget like the assimilation system that was supposed to be use after a week but has not be seen since.

2mth
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

The novel could have been better, but the protagonist has no character, and that girl coach is a very annoying busybody, and on top of that she talks as if it were a big deal, she thinks she knows about soccer but she has no idea, her style of play It only works with decent players, not stars.

2mth
isaint
isaintLv12

This is the first novel that has made me want to spend my money to buy points to read more chapters and it’s sad that I can’t but I’ll at least leave review so more people try it out. The story besides the little grammar mistakes which don’t make it unreadable is still very good. Story is well paced and very VERY fun to read. I recommend yall try it out 🙏.

3mth
Maxi_Herrera
Maxi_HerreraLv12

tu novela es genial, me encanta. lo único complicado, es que tengamos que gastar tanto si o si para ir leyendo los caps! abrazo y saludos desde Argentina

5mth
DPSHealer
DPSHealerLv1

Amazing book, I want moaaar!

5mth
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