I read some 4-5 WN books today and this by far was the best. The MC feels like a very relatable human being. He's a middle aged man who time-travelled to the past and he acts like one, which is rarely seen in other novels with similar elements. Most of the time, they act like kids despite having the mentality of an adult but this MC, Lucas Tanaka, is well written. The pacing is good as well. It neither hypes the MC too much like Chinese Manhuas and novels nor nerfs him. I hope this novel gets its well deserved recognition. Keep going Author. Great work 💯👏🏽

Haven't read this yet but if Lucas Tanaka isn't the best name a protagonist can ever have then I don't know what it.

I don't understand how a football fanfic has a harem, maybe a wrong tag? It doesn't matter, it looks interesting, I'll try to read it after I finish reading this author's dxd fanfic

38 chapters read. The writing quality is high. The way of narrating is simple but it keeps the interest in the novel. In 38 chapters I have noticed one mistake... changing the name of a character once (from Lucas to Leo). I hope it was just a lapse. The stability of the updates seems to be correct. The development of the story seems to focus on football only, with certain family and 'loving' touches. The way the story is developing, football fans may like it. But, I see it as very simple. The character design does not seem to be excessively worked on. Which was to be expected, seeing what the story is focusing on at the moment. The MC seems very dependent on the system. If I had to describe the World Background I would say that it is a small fantasy in the real world that we know. We will see how strong the MC system is, and if both worlds will remain balanced. I think a rating of 3.8 is correct for now. As I said, this novel may appeal to football fans. Therefore, I think it should be recommended. PS: the daily mission (Solo Leveling style) seems to have been forgotten.

tu novela es genial, me encanta. lo único complicado, es que tengamos que gastar tanto si o si para ir leyendo los caps! abrazo y saludos desde Argentina

romance has no place in action. why you all stuck with that useless stuff.

This is good I also read the manhwa but since the manhwa is slow in update.I figured i will just read the novel,since i saw the manhwa first but because the name is different it took me a long time to find the novel.

its a good novel that i will read till the end. there are some small mistakes during some chapters but not so bad tbh just small things. but overall its a great novel.

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