Item: The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse
Rating: 3
Author: DaddyYxwn

DaddyYxwnLv155mth

2024-11-05 13:30

So far it’s a pretty decent title, (ch 134), but the inconsistencies in the details are far too frequent and decimate the flow of the book. It felt like every 3 or 4 paragraphs the author would directly contradict what he wrote in the previous chapters. If the author kept track of his own words it would be worth a few coins, but until then I’ll be finding something else.

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Pen_DropAuthor

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