Item: The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse
Rating: 2.2
Author: Amine_Akkouche

Amine_AkkoucheLv47mth

2024-09-16 00:46

U really had to make it a stupid harem with a typical MC who only follow skirts ?

The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse

Pen_Drop

4.5

779 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies11

Pen_DropAuthor

lol, 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

7mth

Amine_AkkoucheLv4

What’s funny about what I said ?

Pen_Drop:lol, 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

7mth

Pen_DropAuthor

because I Was thinking the same thing when writing the MC

Amine_Akkouche:What’s funny about what I said ?

7mth

Amine_AkkoucheLv4

But u still did it

Pen_Drop:because I Was thinking the same thing when writing the MC

7mth

Sil3nt_1Lv15

Don't sweat it, bro. You will get a bunch of people like this hating on harems in the reviews. However, most of them don't stick around supporting the novel even if you didn't make it harem. In this story, a harem makes more sense as it fits his personality, his strengths, and the world background. Harem novels can be done well. Just continue like you are doing, giving each female lead enough screen time and don't overload the harem. Most people who hate harems don't even read the story, giving it a chance they just leave a bad review after seeing the harem tag. In my opinion, these people would be much happier reading stories on Chereads instead of webnovel lol. Don't let anyone pressure you to change your story or writing style, I promise you this story is really good and I read a lot of novels if you can't tell by my books read on my profile.

Pen_Drop:because I Was thinking the same thing when writing the MC

7mth

Sil3nt_1Lv15

Plus, judging by this guys activity, he is very negative as the majority of his comments are complaining and bashing authors and their stories, so don't take it to heart. This platform is made for aspiring authors to gain experience. If you want perfect writing, go buy novels from Kindle or any Book store. No matter what, everyone has their own preferences, and just because someone doesn't like a certain aspect of the story doesn't mean the story is bad.

Pen_Drop:lol, 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

7mth

Pen_DropAuthor

I indeed will ensure all the Ladies in the Harem have enough screen time and impactful backstories. I am not one to just create a character just to satisfy the urges of the MC. They will have a strong impact on the story, and the MC's life. Even his mother is no different.

Sil3nt_1:Don't sweat it, bro. You will get a bunch of people like this hating on harems in the reviews. However, most of them don't stick around supporting the novel even if you didn't make it harem. In this story, a harem makes more sense as it fits his personality, his strengths, and the world background. Harem novels can be done well. Just continue like you are doing, giving each female lead enough screen time and don't overload the harem. Most people who hate harems don't even read the story, giving it a chance they just leave a bad review after seeing the harem tag. In my opinion, these people would be much happier reading stories on Chereads instead of webnovel lol. Don't let anyone pressure you to change your story or writing style, I promise you this story is really good and I read a lot of novels if you can't tell by my books read on my profile.

7mth

Sil3nt_1Lv15

That sounds good to me! You have done an excellent job so far, creating their characters and including them consistently in the story. I literally can't wait to read more.

Pen_Drop:I indeed will ensure all the Ladies in the Harem have enough screen time and impactful backstories. I am not one to just create a character just to satisfy the urges of the MC. They will have a strong impact on the story, and the MC's life. Even his mother is no different.

7mth

Jaime_FloreisLv3

😌💯

5mth

VoidBuddhaLv4

Harem is instant garbage. Low quality. For lust filled incel man children. It's a fantasy for degenerate loser young adults. Sorry not sorry

Amine_Akkouche:What’s funny about what I said ?

5mth

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

VoidBuddha:Harem is instant garbage. Low quality. For lust filled incel man children. It's a fantasy for degenerate loser young adults. Sorry not sorry

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3mth

Other Reviews

Pen_DropAuthor

I mean, which writer wouldn’t give himself a five-star review? Anyways, you’re looking at your shameless Author, Pen_Drop here. Thank you for choosing this book as part of your daily reading. Your support is greatly appreciated! Alright, let’s dive in. This book covers a lot—intense action, slaughter, futuristic world-building, more slaughter, romance, and did I mention even more slaughter? Oh, and there’s a harem too! Isn’t that great? Anyway, the MC is awesome, his mom is cool, and his friends are great. But the real fun? That’s in the harem. Giving it a good read is a must. Once again, there's a lot of action and, as a man of culture, I assure you the romance won't disappoint either. Now, let me answer some questions about the spoiler grey area. Q1. Will there be arcs about the MC's past? = Yes. He will need to remember his past to shape his future. Q2. How many reincarnations has the MC been through? = Count the number of doors in his soul sea. Q3. Will the harem be large? = I mean, the guy has reincarnated several times, so draw your own conclusion. Lol. Q4. Who is Ohema? = Really, that’s what you’re concerned about? I can’t answer all the questions here, so you know what to do. Ask your questions, and I’ll do my best to answer them!

6mth

JustanAltLv4

Just want to say that if the mc never opened his mouth during a fight I would give it a five star regardless of anything else. I don't really like disabilities or nerfs in a mc but if he became a mute or had his tongue ripped out I'd like this story a whole lot more. If you can deal with all the cringe a Chinese wanna be talking then you should give it a go

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Vicky_Kumar_7852Lv4

Everything in this novel is good. It has potential but too much harem thing and even including MC’s in teasing and all, just destroyed the story. Sometimes it feels like i am reading an adult novel…..🥲. I have loved this but had to drop. Lost interest in this novel.

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Sil3nt_1Lv15

I am really enjoying the novel so far, so much in fact I am reading it for a second time. I recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read.

7mth

Dao_of_infinityLv15

The writing and story seem good, but I just don't like how the Mc's personality is set up. I know he is supposed to be a "Paragon." But it just really erks me that just as soon as he gets strong he acts like this. And I don't like haram stories, I'll probably keep reading. But that's only because I paid to read this far. Or I'll just drop it because of the Mc. Hopefully, he changes later on. Hopefully...

2mth

LoyfeLv3

Mc is way too naive. A lot of things get repeated multiple times. Mc acts too childish. The Writing is cliche chinese writing. Except for these things the novel is somewhat enjoyable.

4mth

Dalton_SLv14

Should definitely turn this into a series and sell them on amazon/kindle!!!

2mth

Cristianmr2003Lv13

Reveal spoiler

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pb_jellyLv15

overall good, but when it gets to the 300s everything starts getting drawn out. it made me loose interest reading about him fighting lighting for 20 chapters. then just talking to the guy in his head forever.

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