U really had to make it a stupid harem with a typical MC who only follow skirts ?
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LIKEDon't sweat it, bro. You will get a bunch of people like this hating on harems in the reviews. However, most of them don't stick around supporting the novel even if you didn't make it harem. In this story, a harem makes more sense as it fits his personality, his strengths, and the world background. Harem novels can be done well. Just continue like you are doing, giving each female lead enough screen time and don't overload the harem. Most people who hate harems don't even read the story, giving it a chance they just leave a bad review after seeing the harem tag. In my opinion, these people would be much happier reading stories on Chereads instead of webnovel lol. Don't let anyone pressure you to change your story or writing style, I promise you this story is really good and I read a lot of novels if you can't tell by my books read on my profile.
Plus, judging by this guys activity, he is very negative as the majority of his comments are complaining and bashing authors and their stories, so don't take it to heart. This platform is made for aspiring authors to gain experience. If you want perfect writing, go buy novels from Kindle or any Book store. No matter what, everyone has their own preferences, and just because someone doesn't like a certain aspect of the story doesn't mean the story is bad.
I indeed will ensure all the Ladies in the Harem have enough screen time and impactful backstories. I am not one to just create a character just to satisfy the urges of the MC. They will have a strong impact on the story, and the MC's life. Even his mother is no different.
That sounds good to me! You have done an excellent job so far, creating their characters and including them consistently in the story. I literally can't wait to read more.
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