Heya! This review here is solely intended to inform you, my current readers, and potentially those who are interested in taking a read, that this fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains some of my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and also due to the fact that I am quite interested in this fan-fic. And, as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, or poison as we like to call it. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice myself (haha) and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to some concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you. Enjoy! ;D

For a Chinese fic, it's really interesting. It's probably because the author did a really good job in translating it, so there isn't any poison you find in these translations so far. The only confusion part is the systems as there isn't much explanation regarding it, but that's normal in Chinese Fics

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I also want to sleep with Xiao wu. Still...

the translation it self was good and not have many mistakes. its only the inconsistency in this novel that make it hard to continue reading. at first xiao wu in this novel only see tang san as brother not love interest but after she sleep with mc she suddenly become like cheating gf in ntr doujin? and also mc running after all of that only to come back to check her and take his sister? since when mc have sister?.

The question is this is a translation of a Chinese fanfic, but where can I find the original, I would just like to read the original????????????????????????????????????????

Typical Chinese adaptation/fanfic. MC uses power systems from another world and the power scaling is all over the place. The author thinks that you need at least 4th stage Susanoo to counter a fire attack from a 4 Ringed Soul Master (Though she was a prodigy). But c'mon a 4th stage susanoo is pretty much the top half of the body along with skin and musculature. I'm at Chapter 48 so far and I fear that the novel will never truly go into the nitty gritty of the power systems (With the MC dismissing the 8 Gates due to being unwilling to train it, and not wanting to use soul bones due to them feeling wrong) Read with caution.

the translation is good but the stroy really have major deal breakers like the MC he's good in everything but really dense with women , I know this is a translation but the author is Chinese , they are too lustful like the Indians that they will make the mc dense so as to build a harem and later down the line the story becomes meaningless and they drop it and start another one , example chapter 220 isn't this hypocritical of the MC he bashed tang San for liking other girls when he's with Xiao wu but now he's planning the same things and he thinks it's ok the author will probably make Xiao wu a little dumb to accept the harem, I know this is a translation but still eks me out, I thought it will only be with mu bai's former fiancee since Xiao wu will likely accept her since she helped revive the MC and also both of them are doing the god of speed trial ( warning spoiler) , but this jiangzhu in chapter 220 , I really don't understand mc behaved like a typical tang San who he bashed about relationships earlier in the story I love the novel but the mc has no character development but has a lot of inconsistency with is actions driven by the author to fulfill is desire for a pokemon harem but still a good read to pass the time and kudos to the translator excellente 😍😍❤️❤️❤️

This a very good fanfic for soul land and it has a potential i hope the author wouldn't transh it with many harem at In my opinion three is enough I don't mind harem but alot of it will make the fanfic worse i hope the author will focus more on the plot and characters and it would be worth it

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