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CuteWhale
CuteWhaleLv144mth
2024-08-31 15:14

The translation is pretty good ngl, I read the raw up to 153 chapters the plot is good if u ask me, but sadly I have to drop this fic because of BS done by the author in the last 3 chapters, it seems like the author has no idea what to do after he done it, of course this fic has good and bad. The good ones are how he abusses his power with the naruto element charkas, and how he fights using Lighting Flash from Minato making his opponents underestimate him, while the Bad ones are the mc saw masssacre and making one to his Uncle's family but seeing someone pop a head he became nausea, not taking spirit bones to himself I understand u want space spirit bone but they are super rare and u can take some of it more that one, not learning the 8 gates the system rewards him this, but mc said nah I give it to my future sect, now lastly why I drop this one the mc killed trashguy with witness but out of nowhere he got revived BS. TLDR. Good fic I have to drop it sadly cuz of the last 3 chapters, Mc killed trashgang but BS reason revived out of nowhere, seems like the author doesn't have any idea where the plot will go after it.

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Foosh
FooshLv5

bro, can you tell me the original name .. i can't find mtl with this name ...

CuteWhale
CuteWhaleLv14

m xsw tw/1666054

Foosh:bro, can you tell me the original name .. i can't find mtl with this name ...
Death_God_Lin_Yan
Death_God_Lin_YanLv4

i just finished reading this story and i have to say i agree with you...the ending was... disappointed

Joris109
Joris109Lv4

and what's in the ending? Was the grandmaster killed or is he alive? and who's in the harem?can you please tell me, because my opinion about this fanfiction is getting worse and worse with each new chapter

Death_God_Lin_Yan:i just finished reading this story and i have to say i agree with you...the ending was... disappointed
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