I’m gonna start off by saying I rarely buy chapters(sence it’s kind of a rip off and you only have it for a little bit)and I’m definitely gonna pay for these ones sence it’s worth it.The actual story is told in a way that is easy to understand and get into,the characters feel real with only a couple mistakes that could push that further,the main character isn’t too too overpowered for how long he’s been getting stronger(currently at the start of 31)there are a couple ways he could be shown to work even harder than what’s been shown(he’s working “only” until exhaustion). There are spelling mistakes here and there but that’s not what I’m really annoyed at,I’m more annoyed that the author is rage baiting using those mistakes(he liked a comment that corrected him and didn’t fix the mistake which is easy to do)and although he might’ve forgotten or just couldn’t find it when he tried to fix it,it really isn’t that hard to do as long as you know what your looking for.another thing I’d like to talk about would be how large/small the swords are meant to be because I’ve seen him say something like the sword is about four fingers wide and three feet tall,so first off I don’t think people say make my sword exactly two feet or use feet as a measurement for whepons in general(I’ve got no clue about fingers but I’d assume the same thing) so on that somewhat weird description I made my own visual description of what that would look like,something like this. __ / \ | | | | | | _ | |_ || || This description might be too tall though so I might be a bit off,and he described it as being so large it couldn’t be described as a simple sword(these are not the exact words and it sounded a lot better than that but it has pretty much the same meaning)and I’d like to say that it definitely doesn’t look like a sword.so there is obviously a big problem with the description of whepons(the armour has a much better description)how I got around this is just using the sword In the his profile as the basis of the main character,there really are no problems with others characters weirdly enough,maybe the author thought too much about his whepon design and can’t do it correctly or instead of feet he meant metres,because that would be something that can no longer be called a simple sword,there are some other things I have problems with such as the description for his sword but I don’t want to ruin the story of anything more. I’m not reading this over(too long)
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Honestly, the ones that remain are those I forgot about. Also, thanks for pointing your problem out. I'll deal with it.
Thanks,although i pointed out a lot of mistakes I honestly think your doing amazing and have this high quality while throwing out this much chapters,and I’d like to say that I like how the main character brings in new people into his group and you’ve done that amazingly.
Thank you 🙏
