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Death_SoundsLv155mth
2024-09-22 00:35

Would be a decent story tbh but I'm dropping it after 32 chapters of his brother hating the mc and the mc just lets it go and won't kill him even after all that. The brother is such an annoying character just to force a useless feud in my opinion. His brother just hates him to the point of wanting him dead for little to no reason and the mc just doesn't do anything about it. It might get better after, idk, but I'm dropping at ch32

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DepressedMage
DepressedMageAuthor

you could have waited a few more chapters ahead to find out what happened to his brother, but oh well, thanks for your time, it's much appreciated

etc_Q
etc_QLv3

This story was good but after mike drama started everything feels like going downhill📉

Jordzfml
JordzfmlLv4

ngl , 32 chapters of an annoying character that won't be put down is making me not want to read the book aswell , sounds frustrating

DepressedMage:you could have waited a few more chapters ahead to find out what happened to his brother, but oh well, thanks for your time, it's much appreciated
BoneyWhiteGuy
BoneyWhiteGuyLv12

You can’t tell a reader to go through reading your book like hell and expect people to be fine with it

DepressedMage:you could have waited a few more chapters ahead to find out what happened to his brother, but oh well, thanks for your time, it's much appreciated
DepressedMage
DepressedMageAuthor

if you won't read it, then easily leave, there is no book everyone accepts, the book simply doesn't suit his taste, they are other books to chose from

BoneyWhiteGuy:You can’t tell a reader to go through reading your book like hell and expect people to be fine with it
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