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Paul_Moturi
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2024-12-10 04:47

My biggest issue with this Novel is the protagonist has no colour. This is his second life but I couldn't tell you or rather the author has not really portrayed who he is. He is a psychopath in certain chapters, He is an angel in other chapters. Second issue with the novel is I do not see where the novel is going. Will the novel be based on Ophelias world or what? Third, the power scaling is going to be an issue later on I can tell. The protagonist is already too OP that I can't see him losing no matter what. They already introduced a hero candidate who is weak so they can't later introduce hero candidates who are insanely Op because it wouldn't make sense.

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DepressedMage
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hero candidates are weak yo, they aren't important till they receive blessings. the strongest are heroes and demon kings. also we have true demons and celestials, so worry not about the powe scale. also Sikva has always been a hypocrite, he says it every single time, he only dies what he wants when he wants. also, the story doesn't end in this world, of course it won't

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