Paul_Moturi

Overall, I rate this 4. My lowest rating were in story development and character design, which is honestly wanting. For character design, let's start with the protagonist, Ralph. After reading the first chapter where he was killed by the crown prince and his team, he died swearing revenge. I was shocked beyond belief when in one of the chapters, the author mentioned he is no longer bitter about his death, and revenge is more or less not his priority??????!!!!!!!!!!!. It gets even worse, the guy has both mana circles and aura and he is basically a warrior who reincarnated but he acts like a child... certain minor characters who are basically children to him, act more like than him ....the 12 family's tournament was my breaking point....that being said, the world background is great....

Hello Author, if you read most of the critical comments, you will notice that the lack of dragons is a key theme. If you ask me, the title of the novel plays a part in this. If the title was a different title, 99% of your critical comments would fall off. Anyway, I am not an author, so I can't tell you how to write a book, especially your own story, so take my comments with a pinch of salt

Also, the plot hasn't even moved a year yet the number of things that have occurred are astronomical.

My guess too....it's only the clan leader who can send her.

If Atticus absorbs the Nullite core, wouldn't that basically be the perfect counter for the Zorvans? Especially Zorvans stronger than a colonel? I now get why Khan had to die. He needed that Ability to negate Mana

Are we expecting another chapter today?

Never got compelled to ask an author to drop a novel but honestly, just drop the novel. You are letting down what could be a masterpiece. At this point, I might be the only one paying for privilege and it is wasted.

is this book really about taming Dragons???? I am at chapter 120 and not only no dragon has been tamed, there has been no dragon in the novel?

Personally think this was well written.

Not a writer here but from my perspective this is well written. This is about to be the best arc and it's a war arc, who needs a romance storyline now?