The ashamed author is here. Honestly, I wanted to delay writing this review a little longer, but after seeing a comment on the book that left me feeling a bit wronged😅, I decided to go ahead and write one. So, before I talk about the book itself, I’d like to address something about the protagonist, as the story revolves around him. He has ambition and aspirations, but lacks the motivation to work hard or put in the effort, always preferring the easy way despite having some abilities. He’s unsociable, and even though he lost his parents at the age of eight, his older sister still shielded him from the world. Now, what happens when someone like him doesn’t just have "some" ability but an "enormous" one? What would he choose? What could he achieve? This is one of the themes of my book, and why, despite not wanting to write about an eighteen-year-old boy who hasn’t experienced much and has been living in his own closed-off world, I decided to take the risk. I chose the age of eighteen, at the end of high school, because I felt it’s one of the most pivotal periods in a person’s life. As the protagonist gains his Idle System, his "cheat," and navigates this stage of life, what will he choose? And why? That’s what the first volume of my novel is about. It’s the [Prologue], after all, with chapters filled with the protagonist’s inner thoughts. I wanted to capture these moments of youth, and while they could be embarrassing, unbearable, overwhelming, or more, they are still memorable. I also hoped to make them engaging for readers. The transition during this period, after the protagonist gets his Idle System, then he faces his first crush, his first problem, and starts figuring out what he really wants, that’s where the story picks up. I wanted to explore the difference between his thoughts and actions, or if there is any at all. In the end, I don’t consider myself that I have succeed, but it’s not too bad, and I do feel like I’ve improved along the way. So, where am I going with all this? It’s about a comment I read, calling my protagonist a simp and stupid. As a reader, I’ve always hated that kind of thing the most, but seeing my protagonist labeled like that, while I still respect everyone’s opinions, it’s something I couldn’t quite accept. This is called character development, because there’s a reason behind his actions, and even then, I don’t think he did that wrong thing. Inexperience isn’t the same as simping or stupidity. It’s just that when you face something new, mistakes happen, and the important part is learning from them and not repeating them. And looking back, I still don’t know what these mistakes are, as no one has pointed them out. Or maybe that’s just my opinion? Anyway, now that I finished my venting, let’s move on to the book. Or, rather, what is there to talk about? The chapters so far are mainly about the protagonist, and the world-building is still in its early stages. But I can tell you this: there are things written that could be considered signs or flags in the chapters, and the upcoming volumes will explore them. Now that the protagonist is borderline above normal people and nearing the ceiling of ordinary abilities, what will he become? And what will happen next? Hopefully, the upcoming chapters will be even better. Thanks to everyone who has read my book. If you have any questions, feel free to comment here, and I’ll do my best to answer them!
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you have your answer right here. It's unbearable, but not just for future him, but for most readers too
Well, I don't know what to say aside for that I'm trying to improve my writing, and what possibly could be unbearable for you to read, is not the same for other readers, as some are reading this book after all :)
IsekaidFred:you have your answer right here. It's unbearable, but not just for future him, but for most readers too
The concept of this novel is really good and fresh. I hope you won't abandon your book just because of some haters. Good luck with your writing[img=recommend].
author is there any Yuri or ntr in it hope not also is big sis included in harem or not
Of course there is neither yuri nor NTR. as for his big sister, I'm leaning now to including her in his harem, but still had not made my decision.
ULTIMATE_BEING:author is there any Yuri or ntr in it hope not also is big sis included in harem or not
you should include her In harem too you know we can't let her feel lonely right
Bored_Neet:Of course there is neither yuri nor NTR. as for his big sister, I'm leaning now to including her in his harem, but still had not made my decision.
add her in harem bro after all bloodline should be kept pure
Bored_Neet:Of course there is neither yuri nor NTR. as for his big sister, I'm leaning now to including her in his harem, but still had not made my decision.
I say add her to the harem. Also to add on to the simp subject, people became obsessed with saying everyone’s a simp for the tiniest reason, to the point that it’s lost all of its meaning. Ignore the idiots who have never talked to a girl in real life.
Bored_Neet:Of course there is neither yuri nor NTR. as for his big sister, I'm leaning now to including her in his harem, but still had not made my decision.
